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[tatia85]

CIRCUS, THIRD CHAPTER

Rating: ***... maybe **** sex in public place, "extreme" bending, exhibition, anal, "oral", slightly domination.
Note: Un-betaed yet. I will change it in the beta version as soon as possible, but I don't want to stress my poor, darling beta too much! Hopes you understand this.

DEDICATION: to myeyesaintblue with her WONDERFUL

Comments

CIRCUS Third Chapter

[bmshirts]

WOW!! Hot, hot, hot! I love the way Jack's acrobatics turn Ennis on so much. They are so good together. I hope you keep it that way, and that Luc and Aguirre won't be a problem. From Ennis' thoughts, he is thinking about how he and Jack are living together as a couple. Maybe they can start their own show.
I hope there are at least a few more chapters.
Thanks. Carole

Re: CIRCUS Third Chapter

[tatia85]

wow already a comment! thank you! (don't tell anybody, I forgot to put the private thing! hussssh XD)

There will be another chapter^^ And an half-chapter as epilogue. This is not a very short story, with little plot (thought there IS some plot) I plan another very-short-story (2 chapter) for the other entry on lovefest (yep, I will post in all of them ^-^)

Thank you again!

[torry28]

I swear these acrobats have no bones in their bodies and Jack just proved it, and Ennis? He is getting an unforgettable ride. This routine, if witnessed would bring the house down, I mean the tent.
You are a genius. Thank you.
Torry

[tatia85]

weah^^ nope I am not a genius XD Yup some of them have got no bones XD really XD really unforgettable... I am envying him! =P
Thank YOU for always commenting!

[sweetje]

Now that's what I call being flexable. ; )
This was a really great chapter. I especially love the end of it where, in Ennis's thoughts, he declares his love for Jack. Sweet.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

[tatia85]

Geez, sorry I am late, I was awfull busy!

Well, yeah... the benefit of dating a contortionist! XD

Thank you!^_^

[cazzyj6740]

whooooweee! Is it HOT in here?

wowsa!! Lovin' this story, girlie - can't wait for more!

[tatia85]

Hot? Nooooo not at aaaall how did you come with this idea? :P
Thank you!^__^

[gilli_ann]

Wow - your contortionist and acrobatic sex gods are leaving unforgettable images in my mind. Seriously hot stuff!

[tatia85]

Well, thank you!^_^ I am glad to give you some plaesant image :P