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teamhilson

Where There Are No Happily Ever Afters: Chapter Nine

Apr 23, 2011 22:03

Author's Note: So, I had this entire chapter written yesterday, except for the last sentence. Then my boss's nephew walked in, as he works where I do, and I had to exit the thing before I could post it. Very annoying. Anyway, the exchange in this episode is from No More Mr. Nice Guy, and it's one of my favorite House/Wilson moments of all time ( Read more... )

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writerdot April 24 2011, 04:15:30 UTC

YAY! An update! I don't think I even had the chance to comment on the previous chapter yet, even though I did read it.

There was a shot of electricity, and he wasn't sitting in Sammy's anymore. He was laying on a hospital bed, watching himself (himself?) through a long windowpane, face red, eyes puffy, and then as he continued to stare, he (the Wilson on the other side of the glass) turned and walked away.

And just like that, he was back at Sammy's unsure of what, exactly had happened. He started to ask House if he was exhibiting any physical symptoms, but when he saw the look on House's face, his voice died in his throat. His friend was staring at him with an expression somewhere between scared and confused. For a second Wilson was worried he was having a stroke until House's eyes focused on him.

I absolutely love how you did that. I could practically see it and it kind of gave me the chills.

Awesome that House is starting to remember! I can't wait for more!

teamhilson April 24 2011, 05:04:40 UTC

Thank you so much for the compliment. :) I'm excited that House is starting to remember too!

damigella_314 April 24 2011, 07:07:18 UTC

That as a lovely way to start Easter morning. House is starting to remember, and Wilson can see his memory via touching him, because they're so close to each other!

And of course the first memory House gets is the worst. Poor poor House, nothing can ever be easy for him. So IC.

Happy Easter (in Italy everyone celebrates Easter - unless they're allergic to chocolate I suspect).

PS The lovely icon is due to lapetitekiki's and used with permission.

teamhilson April 27 2011, 05:58:00 UTC

Thanks for the review, and I hope your Easter was great. Mine definately was. Three year old niece looking for eggs was the cutest thing ever. She rocks.

chocolate_frapp April 24 2011, 18:57:10 UTC

ooo, more please!

teamhilson April 27 2011, 05:58:29 UTC

Ha ha! Thanks for the read. I'm working on it. :)