Where There Are No Happily Ever Afters: Chapter Eleven

Apr 28, 2011 05:58


Author's Note:  Last update before my birthday, which means chapter 11 is all puppies and sunflowers.  Well, not all of it, but most of it, at least.

Amid the fireworks, and rainbows, and dancing leprechauns, he was dimly aware of cheering.  His first thought was that the leprechauns were voicing their approval of this world-ending kiss, but then ( Read more... )

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damigella_314 April 28 2011, 11:37:56 UTC
Happy Birthday to you!!!!
And what a lovely present you gave us all.
House is back, and the three of them are having fun together the right way! You're a pure genius.

Special thanks for mentioning Father Chase :-).

"I heard no spells cast; she didn't seem to be possessed by an evil spirit. So I assumed the next guess would be potion."

Should you go to Confession (possibly in front of Father Chase) and admit to reading Harry Potter?
I sometimes wish I were in the HP fandom, at least I could write British English.

I love, love angry!house destroying the cabinet "just for fun".

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teamhilson May 1 2011, 01:46:35 UTC
Should you go to Confession (possibly in front of Father Chase) and admit to reading Harry Potter?

Ha ha, yes, I was an avid reader, but all my fantasy-type stuff you should chalk up to an unhealthy obsession with Charmed.

Thanks for reading, and the review.

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writerdot April 28 2011, 11:46:08 UTC
YES!!!!

I'll come back and leave you a more detailed review later, because now that I stopped to read these, I'm running late for work. lol. So, way to go.

*hug* Loved it and happy early birthday!!!!

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teamhilson May 1 2011, 01:47:39 UTC
Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! And sorry I almost made you late for work. :-P

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writerdot May 1 2011, 01:55:34 UTC
Woops. I totally just realized I never came back to leave you that review.

I know that I keep mentioning it, but I'm still in all kinds of love with your Amber. I liked her on the show, but you really make me miss her.

This: "I don't want you to die again."

"I know," she said softly, reaching out and squeezing one of his hands. "Would it make you feel better if I promise to haunt you guys, like twice a week?" Makes me giggle and saw 'aw' all at the same time.

I also particularly liked House's declaration that he and Wilson were together...no arguments and no freaking out. Something else that made me go 'awwwww'. Gosh I love them. lol.

I'm curious how this will end. Will they go back to 'their reality' and deal with their new relationship there, or will they end up having to stay in the new one and do the same?

Can't wait to find out! :-)

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blackmare April 28 2011, 20:34:32 UTC
I've been working a LOT, so haven't read back through all this, but I've caught the last few chapters and have really been enjoying it. It's just ... fun. Really fun, and really imaginative, and when I see a new chapter I grin and have to click right now.

:-)

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teamhilson May 1 2011, 01:48:56 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm getting a kick out of employing my fantasy obsessions as often as possible.

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chocolate_frapp April 29 2011, 03:00:07 UTC
the only thing I really wish is that i could actually see all this happening.
brilliant stuff!

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teamhilson May 1 2011, 01:51:25 UTC
Ha ha. Thanks! I wouldn't mind watching House destroy an entire case of glass figurines either.

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