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Where There Are No Happily Ever Afters: Chapter Thirteen

May 06, 2011 06:27

Author's Note: Here we are at the end, a bittersweet time. This is officially the longest fan fiction I've written, and also one of the weirdest, and I really appreciate everyone that took the time to read and review. BTW, I'm pretty thrilled that this week's episode of House showed Arlene pissed about his and Cuddy's breakup. I must be ( Read more... )

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deelaundry May 6 2011, 11:14:20 UTC

The dragon scene was fun, but that epilogue was the cutest thing ever. ♥ ♥ ♥

teamhilson May 7 2011, 01:52:53 UTC

Thanks! The moment I dreamed this fic up I envisioned the epilogue exactly the way I wrote it, so I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

damigella_314 May 6 2011, 12:54:37 UTC

"I'm sorry, Cuddy, but it's always been Wilson."
Aren't we all waiting to hear that? LOL.

"My tastes have-" He glanced at Wilson. "Improved. Vastly."
And that. You read in my heart.

The fight with the dragon also felt Harrypotteresque to me, of course.

Wilson struggling with Sudoku so hard he doesn't notice Amber was too funny.

Actually, the whole fic was absolutely awesome. The idea was brilliant but I thought it would be very hard to carry out consistently. You did a fantastic job.

Of course the most miraculous thing ever was that you made me like Amber. Did you use a potion or a charm?

teamhilson May 7 2011, 01:59:02 UTC

Oh, yeah, you used to hate Amber. I'm super glad that I got you over to my way of thinking. :-P

I really debated back and forth about the dragon, but in the end I had to keep it because this story was inspired by the movie Enchanted, which hits its climax with a fight between the two main characters and a dragon of their own. It really didn't seem fair to edit it out.

I'm so happy that you stuck with it to the very end. Thanks for all the reviews.

chocolate_frapp May 6 2011, 15:44:36 UTC

wow! that was just great!

teamhilson May 7 2011, 01:59:49 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. I definitely got a kick out of writing it.

writerdot May 8 2011, 11:17:57 UTC

It's over?!?! Sad!

This was one of the most fun stories I've ever read. :-)

In this chapter, I did love the dragon fight. And having you end it with Amber visiting them was very fitting.

Nice job. :-)

teamhilson May 8 2011, 12:03:11 UTC

This was one of the most fun stories I've ever read. :-)

Wow, thanks. High praise.

In this chapter, I did love the dragon fight. And having you end it with Amber visiting them was very fitting.

Honestly, Amber at the end was partially for me as well. Can you believe that when I was writing their goodbyes right before they saw Arlene again, I actually got teary eyed? So I gave her a reappearence at the end.