Fic: Co-Habitation

[teapoit]

Title: Co-Habitation
Characters/Pairing: 8059
Word Count: 555
Excerpt: “Their place is brightly-lit and modern and filled with paintings of waterfronts and dappled canals.”

Comments

[ch1zuru]

SO. ADORABLE. I love how you describe their home and their daily life. (I'm always a sucker for domestic!YamaGoku xDD) Bianchi and Shamal? I can totally imagine them doing that. And Reborn wtf gfhjagadshgd xDDDD

[teapoit]

Ahaha. Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this. <33

[makeste]

Aww. I love the first one so much; your description of the way their relationship works (the compromises on both sides, the having nothing in common and yet just fitting together and being comfortable with one another) was wonderful, and the last few paragraphs were hilarious. XD

And the second one... damn, that hit me hard. The last line was completely unexpected, and, well... there's a reason I always get teary-eyed at the ending of The Sixth Sense. ;_;

[teapoit]

Nuuu, thank you. <3 Gokkun and Yama just work, couple-wise. There's definitely chemistry (Gamma fight anyone?) and their one common ground eclipses their lives anyway.

I'm... so glad you guys got what I was trying to say there. I thought I was being too vague. ^^;

[arrankaara]

The first one is just so sweet in its domesticity, because really, I kinda imagined that their house (if they'd ever get around the bickering to think about co-habitating, that is) would need re-building every fortnight or so. And and the way Yamamoto looks at Gokudera, just like that... Melting right here, right now. But the second one! Oh, the second one!

WHY???

*really, really dislikes sad endings*

BUT THESE ARE MARVELOUS, TRULY!

[teapoit]

Ah, thank you. Their fights would probably be explosive -- ^^; I don't know if they'd resort to physical violence though. XD

Um, I'm sorry about that, really.

Thanks again~ ♥

[kat7077]

Yeeeesssss

[teapoit]

XDD Wow, that's a long review.

I'm... happy you found me? Haha, I'm a huge fan of these two; the thing about Reborn is that there's so much scope and it's really interesting trying to find a new angle on things.

Um, apologies for the angst (I do this a lot ^^;). It's a relief that you (and others) managed to pick up dead!Yama and have it make sense sorta.

And of course you can look through more of my stuff! I'm a sucker for comments; feel free to browse. And thank you. <3

[myndii]

I admit I had to read the second piece again to get the implications, and god your bittersweet pieces absolutely kill me. I hope you write a happy story with these two one day, though I'll continue reading even if you don't. Your writing style is beautiful :)

[teapoit]

Sadly, a lengthy, happy and good fic featuring Gokkun and Yama continues to elude me but I'll keep working at it and hopefully it'll happen someday. Maybe I'll just have to settle for a happy ending after a rocky start. X3 Thank you very much.