Fic: Co-Habitation

[teapoit]

Title: Co-Habitation
Characters/Pairing: 8059
Word Count: 555
Excerpt: “Their place is brightly-lit and modern and filled with paintings of waterfronts and dappled canals.”

Comments

[thier_sess]

I love your drabbles. ^^ The first one was just adorable - especially part about smoking less made me smile - I just can imagine how it'd come to this. You really capture them very well and i'm always hapy to see something new from you on community. :)
The second one - how.could.you. XD I, too, had some problems with understanding what really the last line talked about. Then again, I'm not English native-speaker, so it's rather natural, I guess. However cheap it may sound, it was nearly heart-breaking. Though I agree that it'd be nice to see something with happy ending from you. ;)

[teapoit]

Thank you. <3 These two would have to make allowances in order not to kill each other I think. ^^;

[emeraldcrystal]

I really want to see more of domestic YamaGoku. But the second one. Why? ;_;

♥

[teapoit]

The romantic in me likes the thought of them living together so there'll probably be more. x3 Um.

[_rakugosha_]

Ahh you write so lovely >w<;;

The second one made me tear ;w; Soooo sad

[teapoit]

Thank you very much. ;__; <3

[demanawaits]

Psh, Yamamoto, you know he's forgiven you. He just hasn't forgotten yet. D:
(Or I hope, at least, gwarrh.) The second one is just so sad. <33

They don't need justifications. Gokudera finds Yamamoto a comfortable enough harbour to crawl into, and Yamamoto admires the wind in his sails; that's all.
For some reason, I'm imagining Yamamoto as a harbor, and Yamomoto admiring the "wind in Gokudera's sails". Every time I read that, I'm putting personifications in that imagery. It's really rather pretty. <33 (More ocean references!)

The first one is cute, most def. I love the last line. Reborn, you vouyeger nosy old man. xD

Thank you for writing this! C:

[teapoit]

*nods emphatically* Poor Yama just has to realise it on his own. ;__;

That was the image I was aiming for. <33 I would have written "Gokudera's sails" instead of "his sails" but it didn't read very well and the trouble with two boys interacting is that the pronouns get all mixed up. XDD;

Haha, thank you for reading! *chu* x3

[icedcandy]

I really do love these! I fall easily for anything about Vongola daily life that doesn't include most of the mafia stuff.

The first one was very adorable. I love all the little details you write in, like how the food Yamamoto doesn't like is tomatoes. It makes everything seem so much more personal, for a better lack of term.

And, gahh. That second one. Omigawd. It took me a little while to get it, but... SO SAD T^T!!

You have a thing for writing wonderful, eye-catching, breath-taking last-liners. They're incredible. They make your fics that much more... unforgettable.

[teapoit]

Yus, we love our Vongola boys while they're kicking ass... but what do they do when they're off-hours? *waggles eyebrows* XDD

Thank you very much. *sparkles*