Fic: Co-Habitation

Feb 17, 2008 14:33

Title: Co-Habitation
Characters/Pairing: 8059
Word Count: 555
Excerpt: “Their place is brightly-lit and modern and filled with paintings of waterfronts and dappled canals.”

A little humour and a little angst; the second one may require re-reading. )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, yamamoto/gokudera

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hanashiki February 21 2008, 08:04:47 UTC
I like your fanfic. Hope you write more 8059 fanfic ^^

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teapoit February 21 2008, 10:35:56 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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demoerin February 22 2008, 08:19:03 UTC
Gokudera finds Yamamoto a comfortable enough harbour to crawl into, and Yamamoto admires the wind in his sails; that's all.
That is an awesome line.

I like how you have their relationship develop together, with them learning about fights and how to give in and how to hurt each other - very realistic. The addition of the "in-laws" is great - and aww, even Reborn is looking out for Gokudera. Cute. XD

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teapoit February 22 2008, 08:55:50 UTC
Thanks. x3

I think any relationship between these two would be slow-going, what with Gokudera's insecurity issues and the sheer stubbornness of both of them. I mean, they don't learn to work together until volume 20 or something equally ludicrous. XD

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swn_2gthr_wrng May 29 2008, 21:23:30 UTC
Last line of no. 2= HEARTBREAK. I know I lurk too much (and don't comment enough) but your fics get me every time. I hate love how your fics are so heartwarming at first and then by the end I feel like crying. ;_;

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chaernotwasted May 5 2009, 19:46:19 UTC
AH! Tis not ANGST! Wow I love the domesticity!

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:D D: calla753 May 2 2010, 05:19:20 UTC
Read the first. Funny yes, lovely happy(and from that little bit I'm already off to stalk more or your writings -opens tab-)

Fitting so much description and character into two short things. :)

-sigh- read the last sentence of 2 and thought HARK HARK I READ THAT WRONG LIKE TOTALLY RIGHT? RIGHT?!
and then went down to the comments. sigh. Now I wish I hadn't.

._.

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