Title: Co-Habitation Characters/Pairing: 8059 Word Count: 555 Excerpt: “Their place is brightly-lit and modern and filled with paintings of waterfronts and dappled canals.”
Gokudera finds Yamamoto a comfortable enough harbour to crawl into, and Yamamoto admires the wind in his sails; that's all. That is an awesome line.
I like how you have their relationship develop together, with them learning about fights and how to give in and how to hurt each other - very realistic. The addition of the "in-laws" is great - and aww, even Reborn is looking out for Gokudera. Cute. XD
I think any relationship between these two would be slow-going, what with Gokudera's insecurity issues and the sheer stubbornness of both of them. I mean, they don't learn to work together until volume 20 or something equally ludicrous. XD
Last line of no. 2= HEARTBREAK. I know I lurk too much (and don't comment enough) but your fics get me every time. I hate love how your fics are so heartwarming at first and then by the end I feel like crying. ;_;
Read the first. Funny yes, lovely happy(and from that little bit I'm already off to stalk more or your writings -opens tab-)
Fitting so much description and character into two short things. :)
-sigh- read the last sentence of 2 and thought HARK HARK I READ THAT WRONG LIKE TOTALLY RIGHT? RIGHT?! and then went down to the comments. sigh. Now I wish I hadn't.
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That is an awesome line.
I like how you have their relationship develop together, with them learning about fights and how to give in and how to hurt each other - very realistic. The addition of the "in-laws" is great - and aww, even Reborn is looking out for Gokudera. Cute. XD
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I think any relationship between these two would be slow-going, what with Gokudera's insecurity issues and the sheer stubbornness of both of them. I mean, they don't learn to work together until volume 20 or something equally ludicrous. XD
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Fitting so much description and character into two short things. :)
-sigh- read the last sentence of 2 and thought HARK HARK I READ THAT WRONG LIKE TOTALLY RIGHT? RIGHT?!
and then went down to the comments. sigh. Now I wish I hadn't.
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