Fic: Once More With Feeling

[teapoit]

An experiment on style and tense-swapping; a story about Gokudera's parents written for demanawaits. <33 Just because. Since the two are currently anonymous, I'm only speculating on their characters; I've also taken the liberty of naming them (but symbolically) after attributes I imagine them to possess. :3

Title: Once More With Feeling
Characters/Pairing:

Comments

[teapoit]

Aw, thank you. Minor characters excite me~ I always worry that I'll misrepresent the central ones (who tend to be more developed and complicated), not to mention they've already been written by so many fabulous authors. x3

It was very nice to wake up to this. <3 Thanks again~

[teapoit]

Thanks! I'd really love for someone else to write their interpretation on these two~ ♥

[h1m3]

Golly, the words you used are so powerful. I never could see Gokudera's mum as someone revengeful before this, but boy, you certainly changed my mind. I love, love the layout of the story, pretty creative of you to present in a drama form.

Excellent job. ♥

[teapoit]

Thank you. <33 Writing the screen directions was really interesting; I might do it again in my next one. Gokudera's mum... I think on some level you would hate a man if he kept you under lock and key, even if you loved him. ;__;

[demanawaits]

w-wow wow wow wowww
I really love Colibri. I love how she was the one who said "should I kill it?" because you know it must have been going through her mind. She not a demure melodramatic princess; she's a girl of our century.

I love the screen directions. I've thought about writing in that style before, but I never seemed to get it right. You mastered it beautifully! Art nouveau, aha, I just studied that in art history~

Baah I love this so much. Thanks so much for writing this!

[teapoit]

Nyaaaa, thank you~

Colibri captured my imagination; what was special about her that Gola chose? What did she do to make him want to murder her? Was it her fault? Secretly, I feel a bit sorry for Gola - I think he might have been too used to solving his problems with violence.

I'm so happy you liked it! <33

[tragicallyditch]

OMG i love gokudera's tragic past (or in this case, his parents') and i've been wanting more ficsss. MY DREAM CAME TRUE YES. <3

Everything here seems to be very well thought out and it's so powerful the words just went right through me. @_@; Oh jesus you sure changed my views on Gokkun's mom. aldjkgakd this is AMAZING.

[teapoit]

^^ Hopefully Amano-sensei will throw us more tantalising information about Dera's parents soon; I'm really curious about the message Bianchi has from their father~

Thank you very much!