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Aug 24, 2010 16:30

Title: Longer Ways to Go, part 6

Rating: PG-13 for some language. And to be safe.

Summary: After the standoff at the pool, and with some help from Mycroft, Sherlock's determined to disappear from England with John in tow, and work to bring down Moriarty's entire operation in secret.

Characters: John, Sherlock,

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fandom contribution, longer ways to go, why am i inept?, sherlock holmes

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kaitou1412 August 24 2010, 21:05:06 UTC
Yee! I'm loving this story. It's so good to see something with plot. And it's a great mystery besides. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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teddy_tips August 28 2010, 06:50:06 UTC
YAY! That makes me very happy! Let's see how the plot sticks together. I think I've got it all planned now, to the end, but it'll be tying all the little ends in.

So glad you're still reading and loving! You win XD

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ree_rhea August 24 2010, 22:08:07 UTC
*squee* The ending made me want to squeal quite loudly but I had to refrain so as not to alarm anyone. I love love love lo~ve this!!! Yay to ditching Mary. Yay to Sherlock's speech in the train (reminiscent of canon). Yay to this whole story!!! Moar pls!!!

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teddy_tips August 28 2010, 06:52:25 UTC
Pfft! No restraint :) I'm pretty pleased I made you want to squee though! I'm really, really thrilled that you're still enjoying!

And yeah, no way Sherlock would keep Mary around, and I'm glad the train speech worked! Woo! Isolation now is a bit different from what it used to be...

More soon, I promise!

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jomk August 24 2010, 23:26:19 UTC
Well done! I can't wait for the next installment. It's really riveting!

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teddy_tips August 28 2010, 06:53:52 UTC
Thank you! That means quite a lot and is very flattering, so thank you for reading/liking! Hopefully I can carry this on!

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kepherie August 25 2010, 01:51:24 UTC
I just started reading this fic, but really, really interesting (and great!). Am very much so looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing :)

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teddy_tips August 28 2010, 06:55:11 UTC
Woohoo! Glad you found me, then. Thank YOU so much for taking the time to review! Means a lot. And I'm really happy you like it thus far! :)

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sezso August 25 2010, 03:26:41 UTC
First of all, missy, you take off that "why am i inept" tag right now! This story is way to awesome to deserve that tag! *shakes finger in menacing fashion*

Moving on. XD

It’s not as if he needs help reaching his own brother Oh right Sherlock. I totally believe that's why you wanted to leave Mary behind. It has nothing to do with wanting John to pay attention to you and only you. What a completely ridiculous notion.

"Yep. Where would you be without me?" Aw John, baby. :( That bit makes me a little sad. I know why he believes it, but it's completely not true! It may be a little too early for the comment itself, but he's definitely important, even by the end of this chapter. And seriously, Sherlock runs away with him from Mary the second he starts paying attention to something other than Sherlock.

Speaking of the end of the chapter, omg I love it so much. I would give a lot to have moments like this in series 2. I adore BAMF!John. Especially when combined with missing-things-Sherlock and also in-awe-Sherlock, haha ( ... )

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teddy_tips August 28 2010, 07:01:58 UTC
Haha! The tag is gone, and shan't appear again (I make no promises about the 'what am I doing' one though)

Of COURSE Sherlock doesn't care one little bit if John pays attention to him or not. Pfft! As far as he's concerned John could just disappear and he'd never notice, right?

But it is so new and John so...unsure. *hugs* Sherlock needs him though it may be hard to see sometimes. They can both be so thick!

And YAY! The end was really finicky this time, so I'm glad it worked! We definitely need more BAMF!John moments since it would seem to balance out the Crap-I'm-a-victim-again!John moments. And turning the tables on Sherlock is so fun, and John really is the only one to surprise him...aren't they sweet?

And by all means, continue fangirling! Hehe, you're comments are hugely inspiring and very, VERY much appreciated! Thank you!

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