SHORT STORY

[teenhearthrob]

here is an exerpt from a short story im composing

Comments

[squealnshakeit]

brilliant.
please do write more.

[teenhearthrob]

i dont know if i can stop

[squealnshakeit]

that sounds like you're on ritalin.

[teenhearthrob]

haha im not but i can pretend that im on ritalin with you if you want

corrections

[smokyeyes]

pissed-negative connotation
pissa(h)-positive connotation
so unless he was particularly overjoyed by the fact that he didn't actually slay the dragons then no, that's not "ok".

Re: corrections

[teenhearthrob]

do not gimme shits
or ill show to you what correcting really means

Re: corrections

[smokyeyes]

don't start with me, fascist dictator.

Re: corrections

[teenhearthrob]

im in a 3 point stance racing towards global domination

[ex_prioritiz449]

i like this excerpt.
i want a final drafttttt.

[squealnshakeit]

hi!!!! im drunk and wanted to say hello to my favorite online friend!!!!! im either typing amazingly well or amazingly horribly tonight i cant fucking tell. i probably wouldbve called you because i call everyone when im drunk but you live in bumfuck new hamshire like a fucking chink/nigger!!!! slash i cdont have your phone number. wtf am i talking abotu. i fodnt know fuck