Fic: Juggle

[tehangst]

This is...a weird one.

It just sort of came out, on a random prompt from my juggling balls sitting innocently beside my desk. I'd love constructive crit on it because of its abruptness and weirdness. I'm not sure how other people will take it.

x-posted a bit.

Title: Juggle
Author: tehangst
Website: n/a
Pairing(s): Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG
Warning(s

Comments

[tousled_quill]

Oh god. That was beautifully hearbreaking. So well done. I can't even say anything coherant, I'm so floored. I'm actually tearing up.
This is going in my mems. Thank you so much for sharing it.

[theo_winterwood]

Oh . . . Wow. I wish I could think of something better to say, but I'm honestly rather speechless. That was incredible. I think I cried. Really.

It was absolutely beautiful.

[sweety167]

ohmigod... Oh, that was....so painful. But so beautiful. It's an amazing piece of writing.

[kyasuriin]

oh I loved it and even though I knew what was coming in the last chapter I read it anyways.. lovely analogy & little quirks of Sirius. much love :)

[beckaandzac]

This is kind of thing I love reading, with a theme that drives the whole story and comes round to add weight at the end. The mess of oranges in the kitchen, the idea that they left in the middle of something so trivial (and also so important) to go to the Ministry is heartbreakingly perfect. It doesn't seem abrupt or weird at all. I have a few nitpicks, but all in all, it's a wonderful piece.