Comments | telosphilos: Drabble for the Naruto fans

telosphilos

Drabble for the Naruto fans

Aug 04, 2005 20:32

I worked on this with dragon_bite's encouragement today. I have no idea what to do with it so I'm posting it and pretending it doesn't exist. I have no inspiration past where I got with it.

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naruto drabble

Comments 38

alana2x1 August 5 2005, 01:33:50 UTC

Hehehe. That was awesome! I loved kickass!Iruka. I think everyone should flag up his abilities. Poor under-appreciated as a ninja 'Ruka. Course having him fight with an awesome staff in a semi-naked, just been rudely awoken state was extremely nice too *drools* Loved having it all through Kashi's eyes too. Super perverted and extremely funny XDD

Great stuff! Love it! ^___^

telosphilos August 5 2005, 11:36:48 UTC

Oh yes, quite rudely awoken by really loud alarms going off. He's off running just as soon as he has rolled out of bed, didn't even bother with shoes. Of course he's pissed to find he's the only one that responded to the alarm. After all, he is just a chuunin.

chibirisuchan August 5 2005, 02:24:07 UTC

droooooooooooooooooooooollllll... ^_______^

hoping this one has a continuation bouncing around somewhere in a corner of your head? If so, will we get to see it sometime? ^___^

telosphilos August 5 2005, 11:28:11 UTC

I'll continue it whenever I actually figure out how to continue it. From start to finish that is all I ever had for this ficlet. Drunken Kakashi's editorial commentary was just too funny. I'm glad I did a limited third person perspective. It certainly helped get it done.

midnightdiddle August 5 2005, 03:59:47 UTC

Oh, this is the half-dressed ticked off Iruka we've been waiting for? Nice, I like.

telosphilos August 5 2005, 11:29:15 UTC

This is the one that lives in my head. Its strange how Kakashi just completely ignores the fact everyone else wants to go back to bed. You would think he would want to join them.

jade_dragoness August 5 2005, 04:03:02 UTC

Ohh... half-naked-dangerous-TICKED OFF-Iruka is my favorite! Ok, my second favorite. Fully naked would have been my favorite! *grins* Great story.

I have to stick this in my memories. And whimper frantically in hope that one day you will expand it. *whine*

*hugs*

telosphilos August 5 2005, 11:30:32 UTC

Oh fully naked is my favorite too. Of course I do have a bit of a weak point for men who can carry on with authority buck naked. It would be expanded today if I had the inspiration for it. I just don't know where to go with it.

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telosphilos August 5 2005, 11:31:19 UTC

You'll know when I do. Right now, I haven't a clue. Could you tell me?

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telosphilos August 7 2005, 13:01:31 UTC

At most, I'd go for 6 to 8 chapters. I've had too many incomplete monsters visit me. Evil things, no one enjoys it when a story is incomplete.