Comments | tempest675: Writing

tempest675

Writing

May 02, 2007 14:21

I have been writing again and to my absolute surprise, I actually like what I've done. But since it's not me that matters, I'd like to get more opinions on it. So, if you have the time and could read through what I have, I would appreciate it. Please don't forget to leave a comment, though ( Read more... )

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It brought tears to my eyes. . . rayvinkalis May 3 2007, 19:09:10 UTC

And somewhere deep inside Jacendo screams and fumes. The tears are not from me alone. . . Jace could never be evil inside. It pains me to read this. The writing is excellent, very thought out, but I can't say I like it. I hate being bias about it. I'm sorry.

Re: It brought tears to my eyes. . . tempest675 May 4 2007, 15:40:57 UTC

There is nothing in the story to say that he is evil, just tortured and lost. Besides, it's not finished yet, I do have a lot more planned. That is just what I turned in. I have every intention of continuing on. It's the first time in a long time that I have liked my writing. Anyway, I'm glad that you read it and I hope you keep reading it. While not completely accurate, it's close.

Re: It brought tears to my eyes. . . rayvinkalis May 5 2007, 02:29:15 UTC

I didn't think it was finished, or at least I was badly hoping it wasn't finished. :: chuckles :: I did like it. It's hard to say that when It looks as though Jace has turned sides, but I did enjoy it. You had me hooked as soon as I started reading it. :: grins :: Keep going. I can't wait to read more. :: walks off a little ways and plops down in the corner, hiding her head in her arms and knees :: I miss paper roleplaying!!!!!!