Critique post, here we go~

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• Just don't post negatives if you aren't willing to give advice
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• Don't worry, I'm not going to hunt you down because you don't like the way I RP her.
• Don't drama mama this post, please :x

She could hear seagulls gawking around, and the sound of the ocean around her. It didn’t take her long to realize she was on a boat. She could taste the salt in the air in her mouth, and see the light bounce of the water ( Read more... )

( I'll be on my best behavior, taking shots for mother nature once my fist is in the cupboard.Love is never falling over. )

( Everything it seems I likes a little bit stronger a little bit thicker, a little bit harmful for me )

( It's just me and the minibar, nobody else. And I sing at the top of my lungs Happy birthday us. )