BEAUTY OF THE FORBIDDEN - 13/? - JONGHYUN X KIBUM

[tewki]

Title: Beauty of the Forbidden
Paring: Jonghyun/Kibum, Jonghyun/Jessica
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (PG-13)
Genre: AU, romance, angst, smut
Chapter: Chapter 13: Lies
Beta: bonbonyuri
Warnings: Pervy stuff?
Disclaimer: Nothing is mine except from the plot.
Summary: Jonghyun is bored, Kibum is curious and lust is sinful

Comments

[adrianaaamber]

omg i've waited for this :) thank you for this update! it was so good! i can totally feel jonghyun's fucked up emotions here.. his confusion, regret and everything. hmm. and the last line was a shocker! now i wonder what is he going to do and what's gonna happen to him and kibum now.. oh btw, i love onew.. i love how he takes care of kibum ^^ I'm so i n love with your writing, And i'm so addicted to this fic.. i'll wait for ur next update patiently :)

[tewki]

Thank you~! I'm glad you liked the chapter :3 And thank you for commenting as well!

[tewki]

I'm glad you like the chapter! :3 Thank you for reading and commenting~

[zoonetix]

i dont usually comment on fics but fuckkkkkkkkkk ;-;
thank you for trying to complete this fic.. when i saw this on shined_replay i was like omg wtf THIS AINT REALLLLL T_T

your writing is beautiful :) so is the storyline omg
eternal favourite chaptered fic <3

[tewki]

Thank you~ I'm glad you liked this chapter and left a nice comment! :3

[noonaofdarkness]

I get so happy whenever i see an update for this fic, because for the longest time I had accepted that it might never be finished. Thank you for working to finish it!

I'm excited to see how Jonghyun is going to handle this revelation. Even though I agree with Jinki 100%, I'm still rooting for Jongkey in the end.

this chapter was great, I look forward to the next!

[tewki]

Thank you~! I'll make sure to update ASAP!

[stellabella1]

this chapter YES, such a nice surprise. thank-you for continuing and working so hard to write it!
i have to say, i love how there are no holes in this story. it's really believable like this part Jessica had already said this before. Jonghyun had, too. Jonghyun's whole life seemed to be nothing but a bad movie on repeat. i like how they've both had fights about their situation but obviously realised that they're both stuck in it. because you read fics all the time where it's simple miscommunication or that they're both unhappy but never said anything about it, and it's just nice to read something where there is so much flesh to it. idk i just love the whole story ^^

[tewki]

Thank you so much~ Your comment made me really happy :3 I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well!