Life Stories (Part 4)

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When Jin finally got to the hospital two days later, nobody was surprised. Junno merely nodded, Koki ignored him, and Nakamaru gave him a long tight hug.

"What took you so long?" Ueda said softly, opening the door to the ward. After that, everyone was quiet and left the ward to the two of them.

Jin stared at the still figure in the white bed. Kame.

Comments

[annedee08]

how heartbreaking...
it made me cry ;_;
but it's good jin's moving on.

otsukare~ ^^

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♥ thank you! XD

sorry bout making you cry but really glad you liked it!

[robileczuya]

you broke my heart into tiny little pieces. DAMN.
it's so angsty yet so good..
i'm always carried away by ANGST. damnit.. :(((

yes, i like heartkeepers, too.
damn.. i've been crying since part 2 of this.

lovely, though.
you broke my heart more than jin and kame felt.

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Hahaha i remember you XDXDXD tomemiprozac and you cracked me up with your comments at Heartkeepers XDXD

Thank you so much for reading! ♥

sorry for making you cry ; and urm, breaking your heart! XDXD

[robileczuya]

lol. that's because it's so angsty. :P
HOW DO YOU MANAGE TO MAKE ME CRY WITH YOUR FICS?! TELL ME, TELL MEEEEEE!

*gets bricked*

LOL. honestly i don't want to write angst fics coz' it makes me cry a lot. =PP

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HAHAHAH XD I really don know ; angst is just really fun to write ahahahah. and kinda sad at the same time :/

write angst write angst! come onnn.
srsly; start writing just one piece? :DDD i'd beta it for you even!

ps. i have decided to try to start to write fluff! hee. XDXDXD

[pikamaki]

I'm crying......wyyyyyyy..the story is beautiful....it really pierced my heart

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heee sorry for making you cry XD

but thank you anyway for reading!

[pikamaki]

I was desperate...'coz i felt so bad...I wanted to tell you to bring kame back to life...like "no this isn't happening!!!"...you're an effective writer...i love the plot...really interesting and touching

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THANK YOU BABE :D

i wished i had more time to write!

[jeniski]

beautiful story i like it a lot.

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thank you :DDD
glad u liked it.

[luvmile]

i cried... a lot.
i loved it!!! is really sad but is a great story.
you did a beautiful job here. ^^

I’ll save it as one of my favorite’s stories. *o*

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haha okay thanks babe :DD
glad u liked it.