Transformers Anonymous Writing Feedback Meme

May 21, 2009 14:39


ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

Rules for the meme:
  • If you’re a writer, comment to this post with your username.
  • Commenters, no drama please. Play like adults. And writers, be prepared for any comment.
  • Pimp the meme out by posting the link to your thread into your journal.
  • Be honest.

The idea for this fandom specific meme was taken from trivialaffair 's version and ( Read more... )

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sbx May 21 2009, 17:50:15 UTC
This a really interesting idea.

sbx here at LJ or SBX at FF.net

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sbx May 21 2009, 22:33:45 UTC
I love your fics, really truly love your fics. Though the fact that some of your fics seem to be permanent WIPs really makes me cry.

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sunny_and_sides May 23 2009, 02:32:13 UTC
Like kirin above... I love what you come up with at the rare pairings site and I also enjoy your other fics too :D

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xaefryl May 21 2009, 18:34:37 UTC
sketched_memory / Kirii (@ FF.net)

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xaefryl May 22 2009, 03:10:34 UTC
Hello. I really love many of your stories. I really don't want to say other than I really simply enjoy them. I wouldn't have you change anything that you do in your writing style. I really hope to see more of "A Study of Twins".

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xaefryl May 23 2009, 05:26:56 UTC
I love your fics so very much! And am hoping for more Cadence soon. *begs*

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lola_hard May 21 2009, 18:36:54 UTC
lola_hard (LJ)
and
Lola Hard (Fanfiction.Net)

This is a cool idea, and I'm ready to hear the truth, just like everyone else here :)

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lola_hard May 23 2009, 13:51:57 UTC
Your style is fantastic and your characterisation is spot-on. I love seeing your fic posts turn up on my flist.

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lola_hard May 23 2009, 20:18:55 UTC
Oh, thank you :) I was beginning to think nobody really reads my stuff :D
And, I didn't expect to hear that I actually have a style... it's awesome that you think I do have it :) *is surprised and happy*

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lola_hard May 24 2009, 02:10:10 UTC
I do enjoy reading your stories, they have a lot of depth and good characterisation. My favourites are Can't Say No & Morning Tea.

The way you have written both those stories is quite frankly amazing. The plots are well thought out, and the simple ideas, like a Cryo-Bomb are brilliant.

My only negative comment is that you seem to have a lot of unfinished stories and you update very sporadically. It does make me wonder if you will ever finish the stories. As such it makes me wary to get too involved with them in case you disappear for good and don't finish them.

Which, as you may have experienced yourself, is really frustrating.

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lyricality May 21 2009, 18:39:43 UTC
lyricality on livejournal.

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lyricality May 21 2009, 20:19:04 UTC
I'm always amazed at the depth pf thinking and thought and interaction between characters when you write. You don't jsut write something for the hell of it, I always see a good amount of love going into your ficcage.

and that makes you one of my favorites to read.

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lyricality May 21 2009, 21:34:08 UTC
I love your character interactions a great deal, and find them some of the best in the Transfandom. However, I find your action sequences and the plots themselves somewhat lacking, and I believe that you need to develop those skills. I'm certain it's something you can do, but it's true that your greatest strength is characterization.

I cannot stress how good you are at characterization. It carries your fanfics brilliantly.

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lyricality May 21 2009, 22:59:31 UTC
No matter what you write, even if I don't like the pairing or 'verse, I am always amazed by how pleasant to read, beautifully worded your prose is.
It's not often that I stop, re-read a paragraph, and think 'that sounded awesome', but with your fics it's happened more than once, and it's honestly a great feeling.
So, thanks, looking forward to more.
(sorry if this sounds terribly servile/sugary, I'm going anon just to avoid that.)

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rusty_chevy May 21 2009, 18:42:07 UTC
I haven't written a whole lot and it all seems to be ficbits of robot smut, but what the heck, lay it on me. XD

rusty_chevy, posting my stuff pretty much exclusively at mecha_erotica, known as Rusty Chevrolet at TransFictions.net (although far as I can tell it's still weirding out and not giving access to the actual fics).

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rusty_chevy May 22 2009, 02:30:06 UTC
I love your robo smut. I rather wish you would give us moar! But understand how muses can play hard to get.

It's because of you that I have truly gotten into one of my currently favorite pairings. (If I tell you, it'll be too easy to guess who I am ;P) You made me wonder about their origins, cause I always thought that they'd been together longer than their time on Earth.

I hope you get more inspiration for more fic, nomatter the pairing you write!

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