Sticky Response Pt 3

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt1 anonymous January 24 2012, 01:41:47 UTC
Title: Open Circle
Continuity: AU to just about everything, but most closely resembling TFP
Warnings: Voyeurism, light bondage, orgy, m/m, sticky, religious themes, virginity/defloration, slight flavor of dub-con in a couple of instances.
Pairings: Optimus/Autobots. Quite a lot of Ultra Magnus/Optimus snuck in here. Not sure how that happened, but there ya go.

Open CircleHard, cold and slippery was the stone beneath his hands, beneath his feet, against his body. The fastness did not invite intrusion. Handhold, foothold, shift of weight. A crumbling hold would not be the mode of betrayal; by whatever artifice this throat of rock had been forged (of necessity by hands; this planet had no volcanic process to create such forms), the stone could not be cut by any but the hardest and fastest of blades. Black it seemed now in the twilight that served Cybertron as night, but in daylight it had gleamed violet and crimson and sapphire, colors shifting with the angle of view. He had begun the climb at dawn ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt17 anonymous January 24 2012, 02:03:58 UTC
“I…do not intend any disrespect to your beliefs. But to…cage a flier so ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt18 anonymous January 24 2012, 02:05:19 UTC
Upon the central platform a set of four tables had been pushed together to form a broader surface. This supported what Optimus at first thought was a flat projection model of Cybertron with exaggerated topography, but as they drew near he could find no familiar landmarks ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt19 anonymous January 24 2012, 02:06:47 UTC
He kept on, though. He didn’t think whether he won or lost the game was what mattered so much as how he chose to play. Old files were surfacing in his memory. There were old rules to this game, which did not directly contradict the rules they were playing by now, but could considerably alter the tenor of the game. Did Prowl know them too ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt20 anonymous January 24 2012, 02:08:03 UTC
Prowl moved to his twin’s side, took one of Jazz’s hands in both of his own. “In the ancient codices, they can be either. We didn’t specify that they couldn’t. I assumed I was facing an ignorant novice. My mistake.”

One Optimus suspected Prowl wouldn’t make again. “I am a novice at this particular game,” he said. “I had not played it before. But the principles upon which the rules of play are based are ideas with which I have indeed gained some experience.”

“I bet!” Bumblebee giggled. “That means he passed the second trial, right?”

“Yes, Bumblebee, he passed.” Ultra Magnus smiled at the young nun, but his fields were drawn in against his plating, close and troubled. “The third trial will begin in the morning.” He turned to Optimus, but could not long meet his optics. “You would do well to refuel and recharge as thoroughly as possible before then.”

“What’s the trial?” Jazz asked.

“The trial of the Cord,” Ultra Magnus said, and, whirling on his heel, left them.

.oOo0oOo.Ultra Magnus stood at his desk, but he did not call up ( ... )

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 02:26:33 UTC
AA: Much more to come! Will update as writing and editing progress! :D

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 05:58:56 UTC
AA this is a truly AWESOME start! Can't wait for the next part!!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 06:56:21 UTC
Thank you! Next part should be in a few days - just need another editing pass. *grin!*

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt noctarcana January 24 2012, 14:36:52 UTC
Holy mother- this is already fantastic! Honey, I'll follow this to the very (hopefully kinky) end!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 20:30:50 UTC
Hahaha! Thank you! Oh so very definitely kinky...
Love your icon! Check out the lateral undulation! \o/

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt vesryn January 24 2012, 05:10:33 UTC
jdligua;hweikrjkgd!1!1!!!1!!
Holy cow this is awesome.
The hexapod creature that controlled the scraplets and Optimus just being too badass for words.
Wheeljack 'practicing' with the spine lmfao
Then, Ratchet 'helping' with Optimus' armor. Kinky old mech.
Skyfire being all... awesome and calm and comforting. Seekers being pretty, I mean really what's not to love about this fic?
Oh, question, is there a reason why you called them nuns and not monks, or priests?
Also, do you have a link to the original prompt?
I really can't wait for the next part!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 06:08:44 UTC
AnonReq here (I never can remember what initials I'm supposed to use). Here is the original request
http://tfanonkink.livejournal.com/7561.html?thread=7396233#t7396233

And this is to amazing for words. I'm just going to sit here with a biggest, goofiest, silly grin on my face until my stupor lifts and I read this feast again.

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 07:02:59 UTC
Oh frag, forgot about a link back. Knew there was something... Fortunately the OP got it. Meep.
Thank you! Glad you like it so far!
The nun thing...I thought about changing it, but I kind of like the weird little gender bender it suggests. Hot nuns on the make and all that. Nuns get made into porn, but not so much priests? I don't know but I thought I'd leave it there for people to poke at.
Next part should be soon, as I just have a scene to finish and a last editing pass to make. We haven't gotten to the smexings yet - but we're about to!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous February 2 2012, 07:58:09 UTC
(different anon) I was sort of figuring the nuns thing was to help reinforce the virgin thing--which, by the way, I'm loving, anon author! Looking forward to the next bit!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous February 3 2012, 02:02:25 UTC
AA:
Sure, that's part of it, too. Thank you! Next part should be soon - I have almost enough to make it worth posting but I'd rather finish the scene if I can...so much smexing to do, such a slow writer... ^^;;;;

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 06:11:51 UTC
AnonReq
OH MY PRIMUS!!!!! This is more epic and wonderful and kinky and adorable and world building and hilarious and gorgeous than anything I could have imagined when I came up with this prompt.

The trials! The giggling nuns! The SEEKERS! MAGNUS!!!! The amazing creature and the freaky scraplets. Perceptor LICKING THE SPINE TO PRACTICE. Ratchet coyly undressing Prime! THE VIRGINS!!!!!

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Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!

*goes back to read again*

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