Sticky Response Pt 3

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt1 anonymous January 24 2012, 01:41:47 UTC
Title: Open Circle
Continuity: AU to just about everything, but most closely resembling TFP
Warnings: Voyeurism, light bondage, orgy, m/m, sticky, religious themes, virginity/defloration, slight flavor of dub-con in a couple of instances.
Pairings: Optimus/Autobots. Quite a lot of Ultra Magnus/Optimus snuck in here. Not sure how that happened, but there ya go.

Open CircleHard, cold and slippery was the stone beneath his hands, beneath his feet, against his body. The fastness did not invite intrusion. Handhold, foothold, shift of weight. A crumbling hold would not be the mode of betrayal; by whatever artifice this throat of rock had been forged (of necessity by hands; this planet had no volcanic process to create such forms), the stone could not be cut by any but the hardest and fastest of blades. Black it seemed now in the twilight that served Cybertron as night, but in daylight it had gleamed violet and crimson and sapphire, colors shifting with the angle of view. He had begun the climb at dawn ( ... )

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 07:10:29 UTC
Hooray!!! I'm so happy you like it! *GRIN!* Very pleased to have made your first fill an enjoyable one. *bows*

Naughty Ratchet! Naughty Perceptor! Naughty Hot Rod and his accomplices admiring those shiny hot Seekers! Poor, poor Magnus... *wink wink*

Porny bits will be coming your way soon! ;)

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt swindleslog January 24 2012, 07:23:57 UTC
I am really, really impressed by your world building on this one. It would have been easy to make this a quick, easy fic, skipping straight to the porn, but you're not here to write porn, are you? You're here to write a story ( ... )

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 20:41:36 UTC
Wow! Thank you so much! I'm really enjoying myself writing this, so I guess that shows.

The first trial was Inanna and Ereshkigal, right down to being pinned to the wall. Once that idea cropped up I really liked it and the details built themselves around that.

Second trial...not so fancy, but again, the prompt suggested things.

I toyed around initially with having Silverbolt be the Anchor, but Skyfire, as you say, made so much sense I kept him there.

Naming robot bits after real components of medieval armor is so much fun! *cackles madly* Oh, la, sir knight, mayest I help thee with thy faulds? Truly it would take but a moment...

Unless RL trips me up, next section should go up in a few days. :)

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt aniay January 24 2012, 09:43:58 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

*not bothering to anon*

I COMPLETELY LOVE IT!!!!!!

And you once again prove that smut comes upon moments when it's needed the most.

There is so much about this prompt that makes me squee and giggle and grin and be excited in genaral.

I most defffinitely love the OP who posted this prompt and you for fill ing it!

THANK YOU!

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 20:43:26 UTC
LOL! Thank you and I'm very glad you're enjoying it! I'm really enjoying writing it, that's for sure! :)

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt kookaburra1701 January 24 2012, 15:28:04 UTC
I'm greatly enjoying this so far! But now I'm wondering - if Optimu wasn't supposed to find anything alive down there, just what was he supposed to do? Wander around and then come back up?

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - virgin priests/deflowering, voyeurism, sticky - pt anonymous January 24 2012, 20:47:05 UTC
Thank you!
It's a contemplation maze - and the idea is you get out of it what you put into it. What he did once he was down there, if he had just gone down and said, screw this noise, and hopped back up again, what kind of things he was thinking, even how he handled the solitude. That was the test. For Optimus, there was this unintended aspect that got all physical on him, but he handled it as kindly as he could, and that was fully taken into consideration by Ultra Magnus and the others.

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt21 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:18:36 UTC
Prompt here ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt22 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:19:46 UTC
“Good morning, Optimus Prime,” said Prowl. He and his twin carried heavy coils of what looked and scanned like cable made of pure gold.

“Good morning,” Optimus replied, joining Prowl, Jazz, Ultra Magnus and Ratchet on the platform. Jazz growled, ignoring the look this garnered him from Ultra Magnus.

“You are well rested and refueled?” Ultra Magnus inquired, his tone rather stiffly neutral. More and more nuns gathered around them, gradually filling the hall.

“I am,” Optimus said.

“Then let us begin the trial of the Cord.” The Magnus led Optimus to the center of the platform and bade him kneel. “You are to remain sensually aroused and responsive, but you are not to overload, while each of us in turn attempts to induce you to do so ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt23 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:20:57 UTC
Prowl and Jazz came forward with the golden cables. With smoothly coordinated movements, they tossed loops of the cables over the arms of the steel chandelier, then set about winding the ends around Optimus’ arms, drawing them upward over his head. Being of unalloyed gold, the cable was supple but not very strong. He could break free if he wanted to, but these bonds were ritual, not punitive ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt24 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:22:05 UTC
He could shut down his sensors, lock his interface panel. But stoic endurance hadn’t been the stated point. He was to be responsive, aroused. His spike writhed against its cover as Ultra Magnus stroked his thighs, pushed his knees farther apart.

With a quiet snik he opened his interface panel, letting his spike extend fully, internally roiling with pressurized transfluid, his valve engorged and moist. He could arch forward, stroke Ultra Magnus’ ventrum and inner thighs with the tip of his spike. They could only touch him with their hands, but nothing had been said of the reverse ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt25 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:23:12 UTC
Leaning on the staff of his hammer, Ultra Magnus mustered a smile and gestured for the next mech to take his place. Beachcomber patted his knee as he passed ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt26 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:24:43 UTC
This close, there was no avoiding the heat of Optimus’ body, or the gentle but compelling enfolding of his fields. Hound could feel his deep, rhythmic venting; was entranced by the bright depths of Optimus’ optics. The scent of the lubricant dripping now onto the platform between Optimus’ legs seemed to fill Hound’s chemoreceptors, overflowing through every minute space inside him, stroking even the lattices and interstices of his CPU, driving out every thought but the need to touch, to taste, to envelop. He wanted, he wanted ( ... )

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FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt27 anonymous January 27 2012, 21:26:02 UTC
“Oooh!” Bumblebee squeaked. He stood there, hands pressed to Optimus’ chest, optics caught and pinioned by Optimus’ heated gaze. The Prime’s fields gusted across his doorwings, charging them like solar wind, that charge going right to his core, and from there down, down to his small, unopened interface array ( ... )

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Re: FIC: Prime - Open Circle - Optimus/Autobots - deflowering, voy, light bond, hinted dubcon - pt27 anonymous January 27 2012, 22:12:44 UTC
OP

*whimpers and mewls*

You just broke me in the best sort of way, AA. I just spontaneously combusted, and then reformed like a phoenix, and then did it again. I was barely hanging in there, and then there was that description of Bumblebee looking in his valve and the pretty sensor lights (My God, it's full of stars!) and I just al;fdjal;sdfjla;jflkajfka

Gonna go and join this convent now, kay?

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