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thalialupin

Guess what day it is??

Apr 11, 2006 10:52

Fluffy Tuesday again! (and I didn't miss it this week...) Anyways, the challenge was to write out of your comfort zone. So I wrote Narcissa/Lucius fluff, since I think their marriage was more arranged, than that they were in love... It's rather short, but hey...whatever...;) Anyways, set right before the fateful Halloween night ( Read more... )

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gabrielladusult April 11 2006, 15:09:55 UTC

Ah -- even the evil Slytherins have those moments of passion interrupted by fussy babies. This is good because it illustrates Narcissa's slight resentment of Voldemort that we also glimpse in HBP and her priority being Draco, which we also see in HBP. But it is nice to see that the Lucius/Narcissa relationship isn't completely void of anything but a bloodline-match. They seem to actually want each other here at least and that's something.

This seems very natural, so if it isn't your comfort zone, you cover it very well with good writing.

stmargarets April 11 2006, 15:29:48 UTC

I like domesticated Malfoy! This scenes starts out all Lord and Lady of the manor and then goes to their human side - first with Draco sleeping (the tiny chest -sweet)- and then with Cissy trying our her seductive arts on Lucius - a kiss on the mouth. Much more realistic than Narcissa donning a corset and getting out the riding crop or whatever it is that passes for Malfoy erotica these days. Thanks for a refreshing change of pace.

Love the baby moniter!

Did you try this for LJ cuts?

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stmargarets April 11 2006, 15:30:39 UTC

LOL - Live Journal took my code for lj cuts and cut it. Sorry.

aurelisa April 11 2006, 16:18:35 UTC

Hey! This is really good! I've never actually read any Narcissa/Lucius that I liked. What a revelation ( ... )

thalialupin April 11 2006, 19:21:01 UTC

lol. I've missed your editing m'dear. As for punctuation, I heard somewhere that unless you end some speaking with a ! or ? that you HAVE to end it with a comma and that periods aren't allowed...dunno if that's true though.

The 'the' was supposed to be that, I just missed it.

And I wrote this because it's against my views...I like the arranged marriage bit for Cissy & Lucius...haha...but I suppose they learn to love each other...

My comment-deprived entries are the last few in this journal, and my letter drabble-esque bit at KAKE, there's not that many...

anyaxstrindberg April 11 2006, 17:07:03 UTC

Ahhh Malfoy Fluff! The Elusive beast has been glimpsed here! I like Narcissa's babymonitor spell especially but this is like sort of sexy courtier Fluff, Narcissa the glittery young wife fretting and missing her nobleman of a husband and reminding him that theres a littttle more to life than the Dark Lord's favor. Nicely done! A real treat! :D