i'm gonna lose my mind, so no-one can remind me

Mar 03, 2012 18:17


Title: Shelter
Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He misses each train and sits back down, knowing his shoes are too big, his suitcase empty but large enough to fit one person.
Notes: AU: The one where the boys are in a rock band! Has it been done before? I bet it has.

...don't you think it's time we left already? )

g-ri, fic, fandom: big bang

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laura_lovegd March 3 2012, 18:53:28 UTC
Wow, this is probably this most amazing thing I have ever read. Please.. please, why did you stop!!

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thankyouandyou March 4 2012, 10:54:12 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Well, it had to stop somewhere, didn't it? That felt like a good spot to end it. :)

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vvipforseungri March 4 2012, 02:48:48 UTC
Holy shit. This had some seriously intelligent thoughts and clever lines. Made me think. Couldn't quite follow what was happening in the literal sense, but I loved the way their actions towards each other progressed and altered as time went on. I liked the interactions between everyone, the characterizations that were really subtle.

What I think I liked most about this was how utterly confusing, yet so perfectly fluid and logical everything was at the same time. And the fact that it had some depth and made me have to pay attention to follow it.

You are an amazing writer.

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thankyouandyou March 4 2012, 18:02:35 UTC
Thank youuuuuuuu! God, yes, I know it made little to no sense at all -I'm so relieved you still enjoyed it, messed up timeline and messed up everything! If I can help make anything a little more clear, tell me!! ^_^

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vvipforseungri March 4 2012, 18:29:55 UTC
Actually, I think this sort of fic doesn't need to be understood literally... and that's enough for me :)

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thankyouandyou March 4 2012, 17:46:27 UTC
No, thank you so much, for reading and taking the time to comment, it really means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and let me tell you, your comment made me veeery happy. :)

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ariellm13 March 4 2012, 18:37:39 UTC
Because after reading I can't quite come up with a proper response other than: MIND = BLOWN

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thankyouandyou March 5 2012, 08:42:13 UTC
Hahah, really?? Good to hear! ;) Thank you for reading!

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stupidefleurk March 4 2012, 21:44:32 UTC
I didn't read it yet but my eyes popped out of my head when I saw your username name lol

I was rereading The long goodbye the other day and I was wondering if you will continue it ?I'm blown away everytime.
I didn't notice that you wrote for other fandoms.Bless you for writing cherik and sherlock ! I will read all of these right away.

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thankyouandyou March 5 2012, 09:51:21 UTC
Yes, I know, long time no write! I hope this isn't too bad a comeback. :)

As for the long goodbye, the plan is to continue it, definitely! I've been stupidly waiting for the muse to strike again for a loooong time, meanwhile working on other stuff. I started it with no real plan for where it's going, and it sort of came to bite me in the ass. Plot is not my strong suit! But I'll certainly try to continue it.

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stupidefleurk March 6 2012, 21:59:30 UTC

... )

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thankyouandyou March 7 2012, 11:52:47 UTC
...........you liked it? YOSH!


... )

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