Comments | thatdayismine: fic: it's a fire [block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17]

thatdayismine

fic: it's a fire [block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17]

Oct 31, 2011 23:32

it's a fire
block b; zbomb, jaeco, jaebomb; nc-17; 3000
minhyuk is black smoke, curling around jiho like a claw, choking.

( There is a fine line, Jiho thinks, between what it is he needs and what it is he wants. )

!fanfic, pairing: minhyuk/jiho, pairing: minhyuk/jaehyo, pairing: jaehyo/jiho, fandom: block b, !oneshot

Comments 20

pervertparade November 1 2011, 04:19:23 UTC

This is just...this is. Hot and fiscal. Hot and fiscal for you R.N.

BB, I JUST THINK THIS IS A FANTASTIC ACCOMPLISHMENT. THE WAY IT'S WRITTEN FROM START TO FINISH JUST PROVES, IF ANY MORE PROOF WAS NEEDED, THAT ALL YOUR RUBBISH ABOUT NOT BEING POETIC OR A SERIOUS WRITER IS EXACTLY THAT. RUBBISH.

because bb, this was like the black swan: so, so elegant in a ghastly way. I just <3 the way you incorporated the title circularly, as you know, gave me any number of erections, and this whole thing was just fantastic. Like a falling petal in monochrome. i am just. i am too tired not to write poetically. or to use capitals any more. damn them >:0 ( ... )

pervertparade November 1 2011, 04:28:46 UTC

Also, the way you've written this, nav. it's just so wistful and hurt and confused and intricate and like dancing lilliputians and everything is beautiful and nothing hurts ( ... )

thatdayismine November 2 2011, 03:33:20 UTC

i love you and am willing to possibly have your children, okay? okay. i know generally you have mine but for once, i will use my dusty, old womb ( ... )

pervertparade November 1 2011, 04:49:42 UTC

cyclically* not circularly. FAIL

forthineis November 1 2011, 04:33:04 UTC

So... I don't completely get it, but your writing is lovely and all of the descriptions and everything is awesome.

thatdayismine November 1 2011, 04:38:29 UTC

thnak-you darling~! ^^

i know it's not the easiest read but ty for commenting and idk, i can help you understand it better in any way, feel free to ask <3

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thatdayismine November 2 2011, 02:56:28 UTC

Ahhh, yay for nerdiness! lol

Thankyou so much for the comment and I've yet to work out wtf is going on with Minhyuk, so I think it's okay lmao

countrymir November 2 2011, 01:11:43 UTC

i really enjoyed the fact that you never really went into detail about minhyuk too often. we more or less know something is up with him with how you describe him in the summary but we never get a straight out answer. and you picked timing really well when it came to telling us the basic idea of what had happened ( ... )

thatdayismine November 2 2011, 03:15:31 UTC

ommmmg, thankyou so much ;~~~~; i'm so glad that, just, you basically caught on to everything i was trying to do with the characters! that makes me all sorts of happy and sakfbfkja thankyouuuu.

tbh, minhyuk, for me is something of a ghost/possiby jiho's made him up in his own head aka fight club style but honestly, i just wanted him to be this threatening, dark presence in jiho's life that kind of forbids him from ever becoming more than a sort of average, working class guy. and jiho's supposed to just be teeter-tottering on the edge of sanity in contrast to jaehyo, who's, who's mostly just gone. idk, lol, this fic wasn't super thought out and was just written as it came to me. :)

ah, thankyou again and i am so glad that you did enjoy it!

countrymir November 4 2011, 00:29:13 UTC

to be honest jaehyo concerned me way more than jiho did. because jaehyo had slivers of moments in which he seemed to be mentally present and normal, it only made his episodes of wtf all the more dramatic. and jiho, as the supporting friend/lover/idkwtf should be trying to help him but he can't because he's battling his own inner demons.

but his being in his own thing is probably fucking up jaehyo even more because we don't know how he is reacting to more or less being alone. you'd think that jiho would be some sort of comfort but he is pretty much fucking it up for them both... idk if i'm even making sense lmfao

thatdayismine November 7 2011, 22:15:25 UTC

do i c a jaehyo stan? 8D ( ... )

Thread 5

themadpoker November 10 2011, 03:10:01 UTC

dude you wrote a fic! I seriously don't understand why lj's decided I don't deserve to have your posts to show up on my friends page anaywhere. It's making me paranoid: what other lj friend posts am I not seeing that I don't know about? >l Be back with actual fic related comments in a bit, just let me read this first.

thatdayismine November 15 2011, 02:09:43 UTC

dude, i did! lmao. it's like, all i do these days what is my life even i have school work you know. NEGLECTED SCHOOLWORK THAT KEEPS PILING UP AND I AM READY TO FALL OVER AND DIE NOW, THANKS.

lj's just cockblocking us, that's war i've decided.

themadpoker November 15 2011, 04:33:32 UTC

I am SUPER IMPRESSED. =D You're an amazingly productive person, I stand in awe. Seriously how do you work and do schoolwork and write, is it magic?