Comments | the_tenzo: PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

the_tenzo

PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

Jul 28, 2009 14:26

Ohnoez, she's having one of her hair-brained ideas again!

So, in brief, here is the story: I just found today (at work, no less!) a free-for-the-taking vintage edition of The Joy of Sex. There is no end to how amused I am by this. And, honest-to-goodness my first thought was, "How can I use this for ficcing purposes?"

Well, the answer is right here.

( Read more... )

genre: smut, !commentfic meme

Leave a comment

Back to all threads

Supreme Human Experience, Part 1 unfolded73 July 28 2009, 23:29:46 UTC

Things didn't turn out the way she'd imagined it.

The journey from Bad Wolf Bay to Bergen to London to home was long and monotonous, and the Doctor, suffering from his own sort of regeneration sickness ("He's like a newborn baby, Rose," Jackie had said, "and newborns sleep"), had dozed for most of the trip. Rose was left beside him, her sweaty hand clasped in his or tucked through his arm, with nothing to do but imagine the way their lives might unfold. Every feeling coursed through her, from elation to rage to grief and sadness, and as the emotions swamped her, different scenarios presented themselves. He wasn't the Doctor, she thought wildly, he was a thing, and who was the Doctor to tell her to look after him like he was an abandoned puppy? Of course he was the Doctor, she thought a bit later, studying his face in sleep, and her heart clenched with love for him. She would take him home and undress him and make love to him, because it's what she had wanted for all of that time apart. He was damaged, he was genocidal and ( ... )

Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 28 2009, 23:30:35 UTC

(continued from previous comment)

His mouth was warmer; she'd noticed that even on the beach, but now she could catalogue all the things that were different and all the things that were painfully familiar about kissing him. There were many more of the latter. Perhaps at home, she would have balked, perhaps she would have pulled away and put some distance between them (too soon, it's way too soon), but confined to such a tiny space, there was nothing but him. Nothing but them. No doors or windows or carpets or mortgages or future. Just the Doctor and Rose and right now.

"I was afraid I'd forgotten the way you tasted," he mumbled against her lips.

Her fingers stroked the hair at the nape of his neck. "Did you?"

"No." His mouth opened against hers again. "You're exactly the way I remember."

He had his back against one wall, and without thinking too much about it, Rose found herself fumbling with the fastening of his trousers, wanting to touch him everywhere but settling for there, where she hoped he most wanted her touch. ( ... )

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 nonelvis July 29 2009, 00:30:42 UTC

That was really sweet! And maybe this is weird, but my favorite bit of it is that he hit his head when he came -- something about that felt so characteristically clumsy of him.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 00:43:29 UTC

Thanks! Hitting his head under those circumstances was the first thing that popped into my head when I saw "hazardous."

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 tardismate July 29 2009, 00:42:37 UTC

Oh yes! Yes yes yes!

*iz on knees begging for more*

Icanhazmoarnaokplzthnx?

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 00:45:32 UTC

Thank you! I almost did write more (after all, Rose needs some satisfaction), but then I realized I'd written enough for a commentfic!

(The comment has been removed)

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:56:32 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 fid_gin July 29 2009, 01:12:16 UTC

Then he finally awoke and stood and stretched his arms above his head, revealing a strip of flesh above the waistband of his trousers. The shadow of a crease in the flesh next to his hipbone and the smattering of hair leading down from his navel were mesmerising.

God bless you.

I love this little fic, but...um. Well, when I finally get around to posting part 6 of TGH, you're going to see that the Hive Mind is at it again!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:29:58 UTC

It was bound to happen. That image has been burned permanently into my brain, and I'm sure I'm not alone.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 ladychi July 29 2009, 01:17:07 UTC

Ha! I loved this! Of course they would get abducted by aliens.

And who can blame Rose for going a bit crazy with the hip!flesh? I mean, hello!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:58:18 UTC

I've certainly gone a bit crazy with it.

This was my first time writing Ten II/Rose where there was clearly a preexisting sexual relationship. I might have to explore it further. :)

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 morrighangw July 29 2009, 01:30:15 UTC

It would make sense that their "first" time would be in a rather unconventional location.... This is quite lovely. =D

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:59:26 UTC

Thank you! I sort of don't know why this idea never occurred to me before.

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 papilio_luna July 29 2009, 02:12:47 UTC

Awww, that was great! And hitting his head when he came, that's such a human, normal thing to do, but under such extraordinary circumstances. To me that kind of sums up the Ten2/Rose ship. :D Thanks!

Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 02:16:47 UTC

It really does, doesn't it. *loves them more than is healthy*

Back to all threads