Team Fic Challenge

[prlrocks]

Thanks to those taking part ing the team fic challenge. For the rest of you, come join us!! It's easy you just add two words.

In the next two days, keep looking back to this post. I plan on copying and pasting the whole fic here do we can laugh at enjoy our story. *grins*

Feel free to make any comments here to what you think of the story and

Comments

Page 13

[skeptiik]

***I thought I might help out, if that's okay***

and her fingers ran over his chest and to his surprise she said, "It might sound wrong, but I think you need a lesson before we can continue this little social experiment of ours."

Mal blinked dumbly and said, "What is that I need to know?"

She smiled. "The art

Re: Page 13

[prlrocks]

More then okay! Thank you! Makes my job easier. :D

Page 14

[truthmaker]

*** one edit, from a few pages ago. "The heat from their entwined hands was proving"***

of dancing the tango!!"

"The tango? What kinda game are you playing?" An extremely entertaining one, he figured from the look on her face.

"Oh Mal," she said. Picking up his pants.

This was ***end of time***

Re: Page 14

[truthmaker]

689 words (if you count the opening phrase we were given) in 48 hours.

And sadly, that's still faster than I write by myself ;-)

Re: Page 14

[prlrocks]

Thanks again!!

Feel free to write the end!

If you don't want to, I'll open it up to the others who took part in this. :D

[prlrocks]

Unlocked!!

[circury]

Aw, that was so cute. I didn't think that anything but straight comedy would work in this two word format, but that was sweet and quirky romance.

I love this sentence, and the paragraph that contains it: "The heat from their hands entwined had was proving a greater distraction than the sweet smell coming from her hair."

I like where it ended, with the tango, and her picking up his pants.

[alorarose]

*giggles* It's oh so tasty crack, it is!