Comments | the_browncoats: Team Fic Challenge

prlrocks in the_browncoats

Team Fic Challenge

Dec 03, 2009 23:26

Thanks to those taking part ing the team fic challenge. For the rest of you, come join us!! It's easy you just add two words.

In the next two days, keep looking back to this post. I plan on copying and pasting the whole fic here do we can laugh at enjoy our story. *grins*

Feel free to make any comments here to what you think of the story and ( Read more... )

writing challenge

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Page 9 stargazer784 December 5 2009, 04:58:01 UTC

indifference and distain. Still he knew she really wanted this. "Trust me Inara. I am Captain of more than just this fine ship. It's my job to know what every one of my crew really wants. And I happen to know that you want to make me feel and thats

Re: Page 9 prlrocks December 5 2009, 05:00:10 UTC

Thank you! This is making keeping up so much easier. :D

Re: Page 9 stargazer784 December 5 2009, 05:07:55 UTC

haha totally!

Page 10 truthmaker December 5 2009, 05:19:34 UTC

all we're focusing on the things you want."

She studied his face with a hesitant look. "Mal. are we sure we can do this without hurting each other and the crew?"

He smiled and took her by the arms and said, "Let's give this a shot."

Their eyes didn't blink

Page 11 truthmaker December 5 2009, 05:40:13 UTC

as their faces came even closer than ever they had before. The heat from their entwined had was proving a greater distraction than the sweet smell coming from her hair. He inhaled deeply and memorized her face, her mouth and the delicate forehead crease above her impossibly cute and perky

Re: Page 10 truthmaker December 5 2009, 05:48:37 UTC

looks as though our fearless leader has gone off to bed.

Re: Page 10 prlrocks December 5 2009, 06:06:41 UTC

Haha. No. I'm betaing a fic for someone. English is not their first language and it's their first fic, so I need to focus while doing it. :) Still, I have to say they put many other writers to shame.

You guys were on such a role though that I figured you'd not need me. :D

Once again thanks for your help!!

Page 12 truthmaker December 5 2009, 07:12:35 UTC

***Best to double check this one. I'm about gone.***

nose.

Leaning slowly toward her, Mal opened his lips just enough to be able to capture the tip of her pouting lip and tasted the cherry lip gloss she'd worn the first time they had kissed. "That tastes just as delicious as Kaylee's favorite dessert."

Inara brightens at this comment

Re: Page 12 truthmaker December 5 2009, 07:13:34 UTC

and I'm out for the night. Good luck, cya in the morn.

Re: Page 12 prlrocks December 5 2009, 07:30:18 UTC

Thank you again and good night!!

alorarose December 5 2009, 15:42:49 UTC

Wow you guys wrote a lot while I slept!

thekatcameback December 5 2009, 18:18:41 UTC

It's so bad, because I stayed up late last night contributing instead of writing my essay. :(

prlrocks December 5 2009, 20:57:17 UTC

Aw. Well, I hope ypou get your essay done.