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57 - First Time In A Long Time

Jun 10, 2010 10:53

Title: First Time In A Long Time
Characters: Russia/America
Rating: PG
Summary: 1964 - "Maybe we're still not ready to be alone together."

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

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harusamemosuke June 10 2010, 18:08:07 UTC

I feel sick to my stomach. Oh, boys.

Nothing really coherent to say, except, excellent job yet again.

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:14:47 UTC

Thank you. ♥

mcelligots_pool June 10 2010, 18:11:51 UTC

Ohh that was almost painful to read. Poor guys ; ;

But well, I'm relieved that even though they're interacting with other relationships and different countries, they still think about each other with the same earnest every day ;u; Arrg, must me so hard for them to not do anything when they both know the other wants it! ;A;

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:14:26 UTC

They're still in love. They just...can't do anything about it right now. =/

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wizzard890 June 10 2010, 18:33:40 UTC

Oh God, they miss one another so much.

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wizzard890 June 10 2010, 18:35:13 UTC

I think it just shows how new they are at this. They got together, alone, and didn't expect the longing to hit them as hard as it did. They're both flying blind, here.

sadlygrove June 10 2010, 18:27:46 UTC

Oh ye gods I am finally caught up with these chapters *_*

This was so awkward to read. Like prom night x 1000 awkward. I felt like I was spying on them, like I was at the next table covering my face with a newspaper but straining my ears so hard they could pop at any second.

Oh boys. Oh dear oh dear...

wizzard890 June 10 2010, 18:37:19 UTC

I felt like I was spying on them, like I was at the next table covering my face with a newspaper but straining my ears so hard they could pop at any second.

Sitting next to Russia and America in cafes would lend itself to some pretty interesting bouts of eavesdropping. If they're not discussing their crushing need for one another, they're sucking off each other's guns.

Glad you liked it, buddy! =D

sadlygrove June 10 2010, 18:44:05 UTC

Oh god I lol'd

I couldn't even imagine if I had run into them during their adventures in gunsucking, then flash forward to Paris... "It's the same guys!" "What?" "Those are the guys, the scary guys!" /highpitchedDaneCookvoice