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57 - First Time In A Long Time

Jun 10, 2010 10:53

Title: First Time In A Long Time
Characters: Russia/America
Rating: PG
Summary: 1964 - "Maybe we're still not ready to be alone together."

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

( People spilled across the square from every door of every shop... )

from the ministry of plenty

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plushielover177 June 10 2010, 18:31:07 UTC

Oww...

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:42:17 UTC

/first aid for the soul D=

alatherna June 10 2010, 18:32:58 UTC

Beautiful chapter, so... so intense and full of emotions, it's really amazing that they managed to hold back. But, oh poor guys. Still, they are very mature about it. They really made a huge progress.

I'm not coherent today, sorry, and sorry for not commenting on the previous chapter, I'll get back to it later.

Anyway, awesome chapter ♥

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:40:34 UTC

Ah, comments are not required, you know! =D We love to read them, but if you get busy or just don't feel like commenting, that is totally cool! We will love you just the same.

inner_wings June 10 2010, 18:36:14 UTC

Ugh, I had a stomach ache before I even started reading and now it's worse. D: It sure does hurt when they're so close and yet so far. And they both know better than to do this kind of thing but they just can't help it...ow.

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:41:49 UTC

/Soothe!

/Antacid? D=

I think that's what really kills me, too: they know they shouldn't do this. It just makes everything hurt worse, but...but...

._.

fallenxembers17 June 10 2010, 18:52:13 UTC

*whimpers* You guys, you guys... reading fanfic shouldn't be this painful! But it is! ahhhhh. Boys stop doing this to yourselves. ;___;

Joining the line of stomachaches - you're already got a TCE nursery, how 'bout a TCE clinic?

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 18:56:03 UTC

I guess we could reopen the cookies & milk line we had installed after The Heartbreak? D=

fallenxembers17 June 10 2010, 19:20:12 UTC

COOKIES AND MILK.
♥

wizzard890 June 10 2010, 18:56:41 UTC

/soothe!

Be strong! It would be a lie to say that things aren't going to get more gut-churning, but...at least they don't hate one another anymore?

._.

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seraphoftales June 10 2010, 18:59:39 UTC

This chapter was so painful to read. It has to be one of the most awkward conversations I have ever read... And it was just... Every word between them was like pulling teeth. It just hurt... I mean like, wow... Boys, you are not ready. Why do you do this to yourselves...

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 19:09:28 UTC

They can't help it. Also, they are dumb. ._.

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seraphoftales June 10 2010, 19:21:14 UTC

That was an unexpectedly blunt answer. XD I can't tell if you're being sarcasti or not,,, ^^;;

pyrrhiccomedy June 10 2010, 19:23:07 UTC

No, that's...that's pretty much the most accurate explanation I think anyone could offer, really.

I mean, they're not dumb as in stupid, they're just...you know...they're just no good at this. Relationships, and...feelings, and being grown-ups who do things that grown-ups do. They're working on it! They're both a lot more mature than they used to be! But...overall...

Overall they're still pretty dumb. ._.

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