Comments | the_crevasse: One Kind Of Story, One Story That Needs Lots Of Editing (I'll do it later)

the_crevasse

One Kind Of Story, One Story That Needs Lots Of Editing (I'll do it later)

Dec 08, 2005 00:38

Gluttony Part II - A list ( Read more... )

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minorsexgerms December 8 2005, 18:13:17 UTC

that's long.

wouldyoueraseme December 10 2005, 20:03:56 UTC

it is long. but i read all of it.
also, i read Very ZZZ as Current Music: The Wiz and laughed a lot.

secret_agentman December 10 2005, 21:40:06 UTC

It was soooooooo believable in the beginning. Like completely. I see all of it. Then it gets progressively more ridiculous, just because there are no sharks in Lake Michigan. Maybe if you were talking to someone who was holding you hostage. THAT'D be interesting. Other than the shark, it's friggin great. Really interesting, I was gonna ask if you had a girlfriend that broke up with you because I thought it was true.

Or is it?

Anyways, its kick-ass.

-Phil

secret_agentman December 11 2005, 05:01:00 UTC

hear hear
-a

the_crevasse December 11 2005, 05:26:00 UTC

Oh. No sharks in Lake Michigan?
Good.

rhetoricwarfare December 20 2005, 05:33:01 UTC

you're probably one of my favorite writers [w]right now. your style is so consistent.

all else aside, i do like the juxtapositioning of your current mood and music. nice.

the_crevasse December 20 2005, 22:09:10 UTC

Wow, I didn't even notice the thing with the music and the mood.
Hey, thanks!
I think I'm running low on ideas though. This may be catastrophic.

los_lios December 21 2005, 05:34:37 UTC

Or, a Common party, perhaps???

the_crevasse December 21 2005, 06:24:09 UTC

Your ideas are always the best.