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I Promise to Say Everything I Think During Sex

Nov 10, 2005 22:38

Author: pir8fancier
Title: The Wedding Banquet
Pairing: D/H
Rating: X-rated, baby.
Cheque: I promise to say everything I think during sex.
Betas: None
Author's Notes: The only thing saving my sanity during a horrible week of work. Draco Malfoy, I adore you. I wanted to write something poignant and sad, but life is extremely stressful and I need ( Read more... )

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hearts_n_roses November 11 2005, 07:24:40 UTC

That was awesome! I love the addition of Fred and George...hehe.

pir8fancier November 12 2005, 04:05:51 UTC

Like I could say no? I am a weak woman. :D

fiona_fawkes November 11 2005, 07:29:25 UTC

*squeeeeeels* That was brilliant. I just knew those twins had to be up to something. Funny as all get out AND super sweet. Very nice indeed.

pir8fancier November 12 2005, 04:06:25 UTC

Thanks! Haven never written the twins. It was FUN!

fiona_fawkes November 12 2005, 08:48:16 UTC

I like the bit that you added there at the end. Pulled this together with the prequel a bit better.

luci0logy November 11 2005, 12:23:29 UTC

Gotta love those twins! And you were concerned about writing humour? This was wonderful. There was plenty of emotion in the backflash to make a powerful statement about their relationship. I thoroughly enjoyed this and it will help keep my mind off things in the dentist's chair this afternoon.

pir8fancier November 12 2005, 04:08:04 UTC

Not concerned about writing humor, just that it's easy for me. I really need to write an angsty, gut-wrenching fic. To spread these wings a little. But am ultimately pleased with the way it turned out. Very different than what I originally envisioned, but sometimes you just need to go with the creative voodoo. Hope the teeth don't hurt.

oconel November 11 2005, 12:53:33 UTC

Hahahaha... good idea to add the twins!

pir8fancier November 12 2005, 04:08:38 UTC

Yeah, it was fun playing with them. thanks for reading!

karaz November 11 2005, 14:26:39 UTC

I will never again eat cereal while reading your fics. I have a cheerio firmly lodged in my throat somewhere.

Your Draco! *pets him, dodges hex* I've missed him so much! He's moved on to lamps from glasses then? Probably a more satisfying crash. This fic makes me ache for the next WatC. *is patient*

I love the back and forth of this and all the snarky little details. I went back and re-read. F&G are so much funnier now that I know they are in on the joke. I swear Draco paid them to ask about his skills.

pir8fancier November 12 2005, 04:09:50 UTC

You of ALL people should know better. Am the poster child for lodged cherrios.

Yes, yes, the next chapter of Champions is next. All those pictures of the luscious Tom Felton will NOT go to waste.