Comments | the_murder: WOOT POETRY!!!

the_murder

WOOT POETRY!!!

Nov 20, 2004 23:31

lying awake with you.
reaching for something new.
Hoping for a second chance,
wondering if your still my past.
Hold me close,
Hold me tight.
Love me now,
Love me still.
Say the words I want to hear.
Lie to me,
Lie to you.
Say you love me,
but it's over.
Say you love me now and forever.

(WOW!!!!!!! that really sucked.....)

Moe

Comments 10

dyingbasketkase November 21 2004, 20:03:13 UTC

I didn't suck. I liked it alot.

the_murder November 23 2004, 04:21:08 UTC

Why thank you...

Moe

wynter24 November 22 2004, 02:28:34 UTC

it was awesome. not of the sucking at all

the_murder November 23 2004, 04:20:53 UTC

I thought it sucked. But I guess it really didnt. Thanks.

Moe

wynter24 November 23 2004, 17:02:42 UTC

not a prob.

mexicanfairy247 November 22 2004, 04:06:45 UTC

Thats depressing in a way...

the_murder November 23 2004, 04:20:29 UTC

That's kinda what I was going for....

Moe

mexicanfairy247 November 23 2004, 04:30:01 UTC

Write a happy one for me please!!!
^^

steel_cerberus November 22 2004, 13:08:57 UTC

I thought it was prety good ^_^;

the_murder November 23 2004, 04:20:05 UTC

Thanks......

Moe