FF100 (Sound)

May 13, 2007 00:10

Title: Oh, It is Love
Fandom: The OC
Characters: Anna Stern/Zach Stevens
Prompt: Sound
Word Count: 191
Rating: G
Author's Note: I didn't include a summary; everything I could think of sounded cheesy. It's a FF100 fic, centered around the idea of love at first sight. The unnamed boy is, obviously, Zach. As... yes, that's what my fic claim is.

SOUND )

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mel39 May 13 2007, 12:00:40 UTC
Very nice Manda. You've used some lovely phrases, particularly her fingertips paint the air. and The air is all peanuts and cheap beer . Very evocative.

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the_rocklobster May 13 2007, 19:34:22 UTC
Thanks, sweets! =D

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oc_gambit2 May 29 2007, 00:03:13 UTC
I must agree wholeheartedly with mel- you captured this moment so briefly, so vividly. I really enjoyed this.

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the_rocklobster May 29 2007, 00:22:17 UTC
Aww, thank you so much!

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