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Fic Commentary: Push

Sep 25, 2010 20:16

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ready set meta professor_spork September 26 2010, 01:53:52 UTC

Hmmm. You know, it's funny, because a lot of the stuff you've explored here-- and listed as your favorite things about the ship-- they've never really been my cuppa. The whole Oncoming Storm, ancient-and-forever part of him, in the context of his relationship with Rose ( ... )

kalleah September 26 2010, 02:26:50 UTC

Yay, glad you did this.

Dome of her sex, yea or nay? "Mound" just make me think of candybars.

Sometimes you feel like a nut ... :)

np_complete September 26 2010, 14:30:27 UTC

I will always love the last paragraph. "Isn't it just", indeed!

Regarding "dome" -- I thought of the Dome of the Rock. Perhaps "mound" is preferable, after all. Maybe "rise"?

2nd2ndalto September 26 2010, 18:37:44 UTC

Loss-of-control!Ten, pushing all my buttons.

YES. The whole "we want to but we shouldn't" definitely pushes my own personal buttons. :)

I also love the last paragraph. And... maybe not dome or rise? We obviously all have our own preferences, but I'm not crazy about "her sex" either, unless it's actually referring to her gender.