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CSI: Taking Advantage (1/3)

Jun 12, 2005 23:34

Title: Taking Advantage (1/3)
Author: Halina_Renata
Rating: R
Pairing: Nick/Greg B/C
Summary: “Being taken for granted can be a compliment. It means that you've become a comfortable, trusted person in another person's life.” Greg has yet to realize this as Nick struggles to cope with himself after ‘Grave Danger.’

( Taking Advantage: Part I )

pairing: nick/greg, fandom: csi, fic: taking advantage

Comments 24

starry_midnight June 12 2005, 23:09:39 UTC

Wonderfully done! Just brilliant! I love how you've handled the situation and the emotions! I can't wait for the next part :)

halina_renata June 20 2005, 18:41:18 UTC

Thank you. I'm trying to get emotions across as realistically as possible given the situation in Grave Danger. Thanks for the feedback =D

fred_bear June 12 2005, 23:44:11 UTC

Crying now. Oh, poor sad boys, I just want to hug them. You've done an excellent job with this and I so can't wait for the rest

halina_renata June 20 2005, 18:42:10 UTC

Thank you. You may want to hug them a little bit more cause it's not exactly gonna get any happier in the next chapter for them. Maybe in the next one, hmm *thinks*

xris_xrossd June 12 2005, 23:52:59 UTC

Oh, man. Lovely! Absolutely wonderful! One of the best post-GD fics I've read yet. I hope you continue it. Soon. Very, very soon.

Keep Writing!

X

halina_renata June 20 2005, 18:42:57 UTC

It's hard to write a post GD fic cause I think almost every single version of events was written in, like, the first week! But, hey, it's always worth a try and I hope it feels different. Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it and it will be continued very soon, yes. :)

littleeva June 13 2005, 00:15:51 UTC

Oh the poor sweeties, you have to write more.

halina_renata June 20 2005, 18:44:27 UTC

Thank you for the comment. More is coming soon. As in, very soon watch-this-space tonight kinda soon, lol. (or at the latest tomorrow, lol)

shacky20 June 13 2005, 00:24:29 UTC

Wow, so well done, and really anxious to read the next part cause I hate seeing the boys so unhappy.

halina_renata June 20 2005, 18:45:42 UTC

Aww, it sucks that I specialize in 'angst' writing if you don't like seeing them unahppy, lol. There's a little bit more unhappiness to come but things will (hopefully) perk up a bit by the end. Besides, it's GD, gotta have a little bit of sadness in it! ;)