Sherlock (BBC): Martyr (2/3)

[the_thinktank]

Title: Martyr Part II
Author: Vescaus @ the_thinktank  
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Summary: As Sherlock and John's relationship wavers and Moriarty becomes increasingly desperate, the inevitable finale between them is near. And John knows it's not long before his own involvement and loyalties are revealed.
Spoilers: A few for 1.03 The Great Game
Rating: NC-17 for sex-

Comments

[mushroom18]

Hooooooly fuck. I literally held my breath. This was such a delicious read, though I suspect the next chapter would be quite nasty...

[the_thinktank]

Yes, it did become slightly intense, but that's always the way when I write action. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I hope you will keep with it until the end. I've tried to keep it as un-nasty as possible XD

[alicambs]

To say that the ending is tense is somewhat of an understatement! Poor Sherlock and poor John! So intertwined and yet so different. I really, really hope that somehow Sherlock can understand and that John can forgive himself for doing something that was necessary but so potentially devastating!

[the_thinktank]

I know, I go a little bit crazy when I write 'action' based scenes, it ends up going incredibly tense. But you have hit the nail on the head, I'm glad it came across how Sherlock and John are so similar and yet different in outlook. Hopefully that will see them through the fallout ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

[ungalad]

I've been reading this fic in the past few days, and I must say it's awesome, even if it breaks my heart. Damn it, even in the cutesy parts when they kissed or were together, it was so filled with angst! D: It's a wonderful, wonderful fic and I can't wait to read the last instalment. I wish for a happy ending! Even if it would be complicated, after all they went through, they deserve to work it out, they deserve their love. Sniff. Great fic!

[the_thinktank]

Hi, thank you for reading, I'm glad it's kept you interested all this way. It has felt like rather a long and depressing journey at times, where every aspect, even between Sherlock and John, has been weighed down with angst. I hope you will see it the rest of the way through, whatever the ending might be XD

[ladyredcrest]

Still good a second time thru! Now, on to the next one. ;-)

(apparently, I didnt comment last time I read this. Sorry)

[violetbruises]

I held my breath throughout the entire end. Now I feel a bit sick. SO MANY EMOTIONS.

(Not very coherent, I'm afraid, I shall leave a better comment on the last part)