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[theandyman96]

He stood in the front lawn and looked up at the house.  It was one o’clock and he was on his way home from work.  He always stopped by her house on his way home from work to see if her light was on.  Tonight her window was dark, but he didn’t just go he waited just thinking.  She was leaving for the summer tomorrow going out west with her family.

Comments

twist

[theandyman96]

just a little twist for you
tell me what you think

Re: twist

[castleofaaarghh]

OMG! That is so great. I LOVE IT!!! And the twist is perfect for the story. I know ya wanna be a fireman and everything, but you could write stories at night, and become a famous writer. Hell, I would buy your books.
*Kat

[anonymous]

how do you capture it like that?

[theandyman96]

im just a romantic
and just so i know who im talking to who r you?

[_damsel_]

andy this is getting to be really awsome. i like it alot, keep it coming :-)
*janice*

helloo

[sweetlildana]

That was super sad, I thought it was going to end happy but it didnt. good job. Yet another story i loved.

-Dana

[righteous__babe]

That was very good wittle Andy! Dedicate your first novel to me, will you?

I am so happy to have you in my 1st period you crazy red-head! You make my day 7 1/2 times brighter!

I lovith thee always! <33