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Realistic Chapter 10 :)

Mar 05, 2009 21:21

Title: Realistic - Chapter 10/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the future they are going to succeed. Realistics look real, feel ( Read more... )

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Comments 34

verangel March 6 2009, 03:01:49 UTC

*whimpers pitifully and happily* Saving and printing. love and hugs you so close xoxoxo v

theartoffic March 6 2009, 03:26:06 UTC

*hugs and adores* <3 :D

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theartoffic March 6 2009, 15:27:28 UTC

Danger lurks around every corner, I'm afraid. I'm so glad you're enjoying it! *hugs* :D

cara_dee March 6 2009, 04:19:46 UTC

The return of Dom and Billy makes me happier then it probably should, I just love getting updates about how their relationship is going, and I'm just waiting for Dom to figure Elijah out. Also, Elijah and Orlando, as cute as ever. Very enjoyable chapter. Can't wait for the next.

theartoffic March 6 2009, 15:28:19 UTC

I loved writing Dom in this. Never really had before so I'm glad you're enjoying him! And the story :D. *hugs*

_little_leaf March 6 2009, 17:47:39 UTC

I also really appreciated the little portrait of Dom here. I wish he and Elijah could be friends.

theartoffic March 7 2009, 01:42:44 UTC

You never know what will happen! :D

ph34rmoi March 6 2009, 07:45:50 UTC

Squeee! What a sweet, sweet chapter. My favorite bits:

“Can’t get rid of me,” Orli sing-songs.
You get that straight right now, Elijah. =)

love spills out of him in the form of laughter.
Awwwww. <33333 You write so, so beautifully. Just... *sighs happily*

I am concerned about Dominic's curiosity, though. Hope he doesn't dig around any more than he should, or he shall have to face the wrath of me! And Mr. Bills there needs to get that stick out of his booty.

Loved it, and love you! *hugs tight*

theartoffic March 6 2009, 15:29:21 UTC

Awww I'm glad it gave you happy sighs luv! Methinks Dom should be afraid of you! *g* So glad you enjoyed it! *hugs* <3

lireeli March 6 2009, 11:28:51 UTC

Whooo... I think I shared Lij's fear in this tom like lab!!
Each time he's in danger, each time we feel how little he can control his own life... And Billy is just such an ass in this... cold and impersonal, I hope Dom would become an allie if needed...
*hugs tight*

theartoffic March 6 2009, 15:31:05 UTC

poor Billy, he just ... turned out that way in this story :(. Yeah, Elijah really doesn't have control which is sad. *pets him*

*hugs you* <3