Character designs

[thebloodroses]

Ahem... could you please give me some C&C on the character designs I've developed for the manga I'm working on? Comments on my art style and such are also okay, but mostly I'm looking for feedback on the character designs, because these aren't shining examples of my best artwork or anything, just sketches. Thanks!

Comments

[cleodora]

I think her hair is cool! It looks really natural, which is a good thing. I get tired sometimes of seeing anime hairstyles that always stay perfectly in place in unrealistic styles! Also means you don't have to worry about drawing it exactly the same every time XD

I think Slade's tattoo is cool, it's okay to have a couple of gimmicks! Saying he just really likes tattoos is a good enough reason for him to have it. After all, In real life, quite a lot of people have tattoos that are just there to look cool.

Don't worry about cliches, manga is all about cliches XD As long as you have enough original content of your own, you can get away with some gimmicks :D

I hope you post the manga, it looks cool!

[thebloodroses]

Thank you so much for the feedback!! It was very helpful and detailed, which made me really happy. <3