Breathing With You for trinketries

Sep 03, 2014 20:40

Title: Breathing With You
Author: daekachu
Characters/Pairing: YoungjaexDaehyun, (very slight)himdae, ninja!banghim
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: kind of ambiguous ending
Wordcount:2k
Summary: because there is no youngjae without daehyun( Read more... )

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saxophonic23 September 4 2014, 23:53:34 UTC
Oh;;; this is very sad omg DaeJae;;;;;;;;;; thank you for posting

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daekachu September 5 2014, 05:31:49 UTC
thank you for commenting ;u;

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golden_kimono September 5 2014, 14:46:06 UTC
This started off so sweet and cute, and then that ending... :( It was lovely, though, even if it was sad.

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daekachu September 5 2014, 17:55:53 UTC
ahh yeah i was nvr good at pacing the mood OTL thank u >

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golden_kimono September 5 2014, 18:00:32 UTC
No no, that wasn't a criticism! XD I kind of saw it coming, but hoped I was wrong, because I liked their adorableness. :P

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daekachu September 5 2014, 18:06:35 UTC
oh nah thats my own shortcoming hhahah
yeehe i love writing sweet but angsty daejae >

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trinketries September 8 2014, 00:23:56 UTC
How bittersweet~ I thought your plot was interesting! There's no need to apologize~ I like stories like this that are a bit darker and make you wonder~

Thank you for writing for me! :)

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daekachu September 8 2014, 18:04:07 UTC
ahhh im rly glad u like it ;v;

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i_luv_tvxq September 13 2014, 16:41:33 UTC
oof ;;;;;;;;;; it was so sad to see their relationship broken apart by their families but then they stayed together in the end. forever ;;; I wonder if youngjae knew all of Daehyun's essays and works were about him >< ugh, it's all so bittersweet ;;;;;;;;

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daekachu September 13 2014, 18:55:09 UTC
i actually wanted to make it WAAY more sad but then i was like whooa wait tone it down a bit LOLL. weeps id say he probably never knew. thank you for reading :'D

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i_luv_tvxq September 13 2014, 19:48:43 UTC
I wouldn't of minded that ;;;; i probs would've just bawled my eyes out, tho I would still love it regardless; I'm kind of a sucker for those majorly angsty feely fics even tho I get a headache from all the crying T__T

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