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[theburialplot]

don't swerve. i'll stand here till my mouth is a crack in your windshield. i'll carve out a map of my secrets concealed. i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content. a novel idea about my best of times spent. so stop the hot presses and tape this headline on your story. "forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory." they were the hot

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i miss you.

[sosimplycomplex]

"i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content."
i really like that line! but, elias...
i didn't get to see you at all this past week.:(
we better get to hang out soon.
<33kaylee

Re: i miss you.

[sosimplycomplex]

fo shizzle.

[midnightnoon]

hey dude. this one is awesome, like all the other ones. it's more sad than cynical. i know you like criticism so i'll keep trying to find something i don't like about it, but i probably won't.
by the way we need to talk again soon, ex oh

[theburialplot]

being pregnant / getting shot. i've now read it about a hundred times.

[midnightnoon]

you can't actually like it as much as all that...

[chaoticfunhouse]

We need to collaborate sometime, we could come up with a kickas piece of literature.

missed me, missed me, now you've got to kiss me...

[anonymous]

"money equals profit adds to protest leads to murder minus mystery. so write a few lines and cash in on my misery."
^^i really like that part.

as always i love it eli. your writting is so great, i want to be able to write like this.

<3felecia

Re: missed me, missed me, now you've got to kiss me...

[anonymous]

you shut up! haha.
you rock my socks off.
*muah* god! i can't go another full week.
errrrr....

i <3 you
-me

[anonymous]

amazing.