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Dec 05, 2004 02:58

don't swerve. i'll stand here till my mouth is a crack in your windshield. i'll carve out a map of my secrets concealed. i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content. a novel idea about my best of times spent. so stop the hot presses and tape this headline on your story. "forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory." they were the hot ( Read more... )

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xbotanicxmissx December 6 2004, 12:13:48 UTC

"just hold my hand and hum along with the heart moniter. off the record, now. this is for her. your kiss exposed and drove me to edge of the map. you were all that i lacked. your love seduced and kept me like a venus fly trap, but i'm not coming back." - your writing is good, becuase sometimes most people can't understand it...my interperatation of this line is that it's all about "control", it's about a guy or a a girl who has so much control over someone emotionally that the person being controled needs them to function. Even though they want to leave they just can't, becuase of that life source. haha, i doubt that's right but maybe you could explain it.

anonymous December 6 2004, 12:39:55 UTC

ELI! can't wait for the christmas ball thing in attica. you had better go. haha. i am at macy's at the moment its alot of fun. we are listening to story of the year... he just hit play. its good stuff. guess its too bad that everything we had is taken away...so.. sorry to end it like this

eversohsweeet December 6 2004, 18:34:32 UTC

Insane. My eyes are all welled with tears...how?! You are so amazing. I...I don't even know how to put it into words how Im in love. Im going to make a book, haha =) Thanks for you're insight. =* See you soon hopefully, don't forget some cotton candy=P

<3 mer*

anonymous December 7 2004, 22:52:13 UTC

i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content. a novel idea about my best of times spent. so stop the hot presses and tape this headline on your story. "forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory."

amazing. awesome. wonderful. you are so talented. and you're hot too. props to eli.

"it forms when adding darks to lights" he said burntsienna67 December 8 2004, 12:50:39 UTC

You're quite inspiring, if I may say so.

<3 Ilana