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Dec 05, 2004 02:58

don't swerve. i'll stand here till my mouth is a crack in your windshield. i'll carve out a map of my secrets concealed. i am an open book, judged by my trash covered content. a novel idea about my best of times spent. so stop the hot presses and tape this headline on your story. "forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory." they were the hot ( Read more... )

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takentonowhere December 11 2004, 23:14:28 UTC
don't swerve...."forgotten word-weaver raped of his glory." yes, one of the coolest ones yet, Eli, I enjoy reading your stuff very much, and I think I am getting the whole message on this one... Incredibly well crafted and (insert big, smart sounding word here). It's a really cool take on how fear of rejection can haunt you, and your addition of the forgotten word weaver raped of his glory is kind of implying that whoever it was could have made an impact on his love with the calls and letters left unsent. If I am wrong then don't swerve. Everything you do is great man, can't wait to hear more.

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sosimplycomplex December 13 2004, 17:10:22 UTC
dear 173,
i effing miss you, a lot.
i see you around here and there,
but we haven't actually hung out in a while.
we really need to do something, soon!
<333me

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