Comments | thedoctorsmeds: I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles

thedoctorsmeds

I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles

Jul 25, 2009 17:35

Title: I’ve got no right to win, I’m just caught up all in the battles
Author: RaeLouise
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Rating: NC:17
Word count: 3330
Disclaimer: I claim no ownership over Joe and Nick, and this most probably never took place. A work of fiction. The title & cut belongs to Slipknot.
Warnings: incest, breath control play/gagging, dom/sub, top! ( Read more... )

pairing: joe/nick, fandom: jonas brothers, !fanfiction, !oneshot, !challenge

Comments 13

katey311 July 25 2009, 19:13:22 UTC

Wow. I'm slightly speechless. But I'll attempt to give you a decent review.

First of all, your writing is fantastic! ((As a sidenote, I love lj fan fiction writers! In general, they seem to be so much more talented than most of those you find elsewhere))

Beyond your excellent grasp on the written language (lol), your story telling skills are fantastic. At first I was just skimming this to make sure that they in fact loved eachother ((I hate reading kink stuff, if they're just being hateful and there's no love involved)) and I was just hooked!

Fantastic! Hope to see you write more stuff soon! :)

raelouise July 25 2009, 19:28:40 UTC

Thank you so much! Everything you said really means a lot.

somewhatgolden July 25 2009, 19:47:17 UTC

I am loving this challenge/prompt so much, oh my god.

This is so good and just, unf. And it totally happened after the game they lost yesterday.

thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:18:05 UTC

Thank you!! XD

severus_falter July 25 2009, 23:57:42 UTC

Yeah, so my favorite parts were definitely the affectionate touches and Joe just - being there for Nick, and Nick knowing how to take care of Joe even while helping himself feel better. Like, sweet <3

And your writing is just... magnificent, bb, wonderful!

thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:18:39 UTC

Thank you sugarpie! <3

paulsdoll July 26 2009, 00:12:14 UTC

OHMYKEVINJONAS!

First off, you just blow me away with the words that you use, and the attention to detail too.
Second, Joe's lime green briefs. Is there something better than Joe, in lime green briefs? I think not.
Third...there's no third, this thing is just beautiful to me!
Really really a treasure of a fic.

thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:19:20 UTC

Thank you so very much! And yeah totally, lime green with that skin tone and... unff, good times, haha.

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thedoctorsmeds July 26 2009, 09:19:47 UTC

Thank you so much sweets! That means the world! <3