Just found something that might have been there before but I didn't catch.
-The spacing between the menu and the pictures changes. When you switch from "enriched" to "portraits" the "portraits" pictures are vertically closer to the menu (I like the spacing that you have in "enriched"). "Portraits" is the only one that does this. -On the Holga page, "They're warm, vignetted aroudn the corners"... around is obviously misspelled.
Those are the 2 I found since you showed me yesterday.
Handful only has one "l". Also, I think the thing you are writing re getting models is too informal still. If I were going to be a model for a stranger, I would at least want them to write formally to me on their website. Like, I would stamp out all contractions, get rid of any slang and focus less on "we" (which can be creepy) and more on "you" and "I" as separates. I.E. I will do this. You will get this out fo the arrangement. Not so much "we'll do" etc etc.
Also, this could just be for me, but the first page took a little while to load. I can't restest it cuz it just comes right up. Anyway, could totally be my computer, which has been weird as of late.
p.s. if you know...my computer, when coming back from going idle, sometimes the screen will go all funky, like just lines. i can see movement when i move my mouse, but only within the lines. looks like a TV with a HORRENDOUS signal. I have to put it to sleep and wake it up again. Do you know anything about that kind of thing?
Aside from having to scroll horizontally, I could only think of a few suggestions. You might consider using a larger font size for your links at the top of the page and, for both the links and the banner text, use an off-white versus a pure white. I know for film and video it's better to do your text like this for legibility purposes, so it's something to think about. If it already is off white, then disregard this and clearly I need new contacts more than I previously thought.
Also, your fonts are inconsistent. You've got one for the banner/links and another for the about me/additional information. Your side would look more cohesive as a whole with one continuous font.
Other than that, I definitely like the black better than the white. I think you've got a good variety of subjects/settings and, like you said, you're still building.
Keep it up, Kun! You're inspiring me to get cracking on trying to build a site of my own!
Okay, one thing.. when I clicked on enriched, it seems like the page hadn't changed. I know it did, but someone else might not.. Does that make sense..?? Anyway, all else looks great.. keep up the awesome work!
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-The spacing between the menu and the pictures changes. When you switch from "enriched" to "portraits" the "portraits" pictures are vertically closer to the menu (I like the spacing that you have in "enriched"). "Portraits" is the only one that does this.
-On the Holga page, "They're warm, vignetted aroudn the corners"... around is obviously misspelled.
Those are the 2 I found since you showed me yesterday.
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Also, this could just be for me, but the first page took a little while to load. I can't restest it cuz it just comes right up. Anyway, could totally be my computer, which has been weird as of late.
p.s. if you know...my computer, when coming back from going idle, sometimes the screen will go all funky, like just lines. i can see movement when i move my mouse, but only within the lines. looks like a TV with a HORRENDOUS signal. I have to put it to sleep and wake it up again. Do you know anything about that kind of thing?
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Aside from having to scroll horizontally, I could only think of a few suggestions. You might consider using a larger font size for your links at the top of the page and, for both the links and the banner text, use an off-white versus a pure white. I know for film and video it's better to do your text like this for legibility purposes, so it's something to think about. If it already is off white, then disregard this and clearly I need new contacts more than I previously thought.
Also, your fonts are inconsistent. You've got one for the banner/links and another for the about me/additional information. Your side would look more cohesive as a whole with one continuous font.
Other than that, I definitely like the black better than the white. I think you've got a good variety of subjects/settings and, like you said, you're still building.
Keep it up, Kun! You're inspiring me to get cracking on trying to build a site of my own!
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Does that make sense..??
Anyway, all else looks great.. keep up the awesome work!
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~HJM~
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