LJ Idol "Turtles All the Way Down"

[thehobbit]

A young father watched his daughter sleep, feeling that deep, complete sensation wash over him. Listening to her quiet breathing and the smack of her lips, he watched the way her arm tensed, found her lovie, and relaxed. There was peace in this place. It flickered in the night light.

His gaze fell to the metallic globe he had placed on her bedside

Comments

[thehobbit]

Thank you.

[alycewilson]

Beautifully done. I concur with the above commenters: you should try LJ Idol next season.

[thehobbit]

I will try and thank you!

[m_malcontent]

Awesome writing.

[thehobbit]

Thank you!

[sharya]

I was really drawn into this piece - nicely done!

[thehobbit]

Thank you!

[notodette]

Great intersection, here!

[thehobbit]

Thank you.