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Fic: A Constant

Jul 29, 2008 16:31

Title: A Constant
Author: fadedpresence
Fandom: Narnia
Characters/Pairing: Peter & Lucy (gen, not ship)
Prompt: Finality
Rating: G
Word Count: 280 words
Notes: A request for deepwonderment, I hope you like it!

( Her eyes bright and her defiance strong )

narnia: peter pevensie, narnia: all, narnia: lucy pevensie, media: fanfiction

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fadedpresence July 29 2008, 10:49:36 UTC

♥ :D

sensations July 29 2008, 12:53:17 UTC

D:

lucy is my least favorite character alot of the time, cause, well, i really don't know. she has always just been one of those characters i am not so excited about? but this is just so lovely. and the end makes me sad because awwwwww it is so true. lucy would not want to go without him. D:

<3

fadedpresence July 29 2008, 13:21:01 UTC

I know, me too! I'm always 'meh' about Lucy!

♥ But I'm glad you likeeeee. <3

deepwonderment July 29 2008, 20:04:39 UTC

This is pretty much perfect. You really got their relationship. It made me cry. It was amazing. gah. I wasn't even expecting this. I knew I requested, but I wasn't expexting it so soon and gah.

fadedpresence July 30 2008, 09:44:21 UTC

♥ AW! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, I wasn't sure if it was the kind you wanted, but I'm glad it was :D

<3

peaceinyou August 11 2008, 22:22:56 UTC

Somehow, I stumbled across this, and I just loved it. Your writing is so lovely. :) Lucy and Peter are actually my favorite characters, and I love their sibling relationship, and you just captured it so well. Love it. :)