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thehousekeeper January 24 2008, 23:58:54 UTC
:D. Glad you liked it! (YAY.) I'll get right on the Princess Bride thing, now!

I think that Brendon is shy. Until he's... not, anymore. And is it wrong that I was envisioning Spencer's bitchface, seriously like the whole way through this?

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thehousekeeper January 25 2008, 00:33:55 UTC
Totally. Just, anything anyone says, it's just... *bitchface*.

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strongplacebo January 25 2008, 00:06:57 UTC
This is gorgeous. They are all so tiny and babies and confused! I love the descriptions of what they each wear to sign the contract. It feels spot on.

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thehousekeeper January 25 2008, 00:35:33 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, baby Panic is just adorable by default. *snuggles them all... except for Brent* JUST KIDDING BRENT, I love you for helping get this band started! (And then not being in it. Oops, was that out loud?)

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wordsalone January 25 2008, 03:15:58 UTC
I loved how tense this felt. Even towards the end, it's like they know what they want but they're still not quite sure how to get it. They're just so young.

OT: Chaim Potok and I have the same birthday. Well, had. Have you read, The Promise?

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thehousekeeper January 25 2008, 03:49:22 UTC
Thanks. Yeah, they are. It's kind of hard to imagine - they always appear older than they are. (At least to me.)

Really? Cool. Hugh Laurie and I share a birthday. No, I haven't. I guess I should?

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wordsalone January 25 2008, 15:24:21 UTC
I feel the same way. They've been through a lot and have accomplished so much at such a young age.

It's the sequel!

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thehousekeeper January 25 2008, 20:17:26 UTC
Agreed! (I mean, putting up with Pete Wentz right off the bat.)

Really? Is it worth reading?

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thepouncer January 26 2008, 02:59:36 UTC
I really like this, the way it shifts back and forth and skips time but still coheres. Plus, all the confusion feels so true to life, when you have no idea what's going on among friends.

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thehousekeeper January 26 2008, 03:27:03 UTC
Thanks! I had originally meant to write it smoother, but it felt more real this way. I'm infinitely glad someone else agrees. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

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dreamyraynbo January 29 2008, 03:44:03 UTC
Oh, that's absolutely lovely! I really love the way you write the boys, your take on their personalities. Also, also, also? I would love to see a sequel, when Jon joins them! :D

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thehousekeeper January 29 2008, 16:25:04 UTC
Haha, okay, maybe. I have like ten things going right now (okay, only three, but still!) but I'll think about it when I'm done.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

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dreamyraynbo January 30 2008, 22:03:28 UTC
Lol, add it to the list, right? I know that feeling. :P

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thehousekeeper January 31 2008, 01:21:35 UTC
I will for sure add it to the list! I know, right? Like, what have I gotten myself into?

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