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thelastfig

Won't do me no good washing in the river (4/4)

Aug 03, 2012 23:08

Title Won't do me no good washing in the river- Part Four Keep Walking and Running and Running For Miles
Pairing David Silva/David Villa, Samir Nasri/Gael Clichy, Helena Seger/Zlatan Ibrahimovic, Gerard Pique/Cesc Fabregas, Past David Silva/Adam Johnson
Rating NC17
Word Count 7412 (23471 total)
Disclaimer Not true
AN: Thank you to albion_lass for being ( Read more... )

helena seger, joe hart, david villa, zlatan ibrahimovic, mario balotelli, samir nasri, gael clichy, pepe reina, adam johnson, vincent kompany, david silva

Comments 17

burning_moon117 August 4 2012, 20:56:42 UTC

This was absolutely wonderful. Especially the ending.

thelastfig August 6 2012, 05:40:45 UTC

thank you <3

jessicalowe August 5 2012, 13:32:22 UTC

This is just amazing oh my god i'm in love with your works

And i love the tiny details like, Micah's smile and Wimblydon <3 (i'm assuming Mario's cat is wimblydon the City cat, right?)

thelastfig August 6 2012, 05:42:18 UTC

Yes, the cat was Wimblydon. I wasn't sure if people were going to catch that, but I'm glad you did! Thank you for leaving a comment <3

blaugranagram August 6 2012, 00:02:58 UTC

My god, this is simply stunning. So very lovely! Thanks so much for sharing!

thelastfig August 6 2012, 05:42:32 UTC

thank you <3

dld_ftw August 6 2012, 02:19:20 UTC

Wow. Wow. WOW. Your writing and world building is exquisite. Just read all four parts and I'm blown away. This is the second story of your's that I've read and I've had the same reaction to both. Off to dig up whatever else of your's I can find! More, please!

thelastfig August 6 2012, 05:44:15 UTC

Awww! Thank you. I really enjoy AUs and creating my own little worlds, so I'm glad you're enjoying them as well. And don't worry, I will definitely write more once I figure out what I want to explore next. Thank you for the wonderful comment <3

kfunk22 August 16 2012, 17:13:42 UTC

this was beyond amazing, lo! thanks for the tip.

jungle_moon August 6 2012, 13:50:19 UTC

This story is so beautifully written and touching! It's been quite a long time since I read something like this. It's almost like watching a movie. Thank you so much for this! I hope you'll write more of this, well..not exactly story like this, but stories as beautiful as this, in the future.

Love the ending so much! I feel like wiping happy tears from my eyes in the end. I can almost see the words, "..and then they both lived happily ever after. The End." while the figures of David and Silva is getting smaller and smaller against a magnifique backdrop. If only there's an epilogue of them in the future - getting old together in a perfect house with perfect neighbours and all that. LOL!

Can't wait for more from you! Thank you!

elisa88 August 10 2012, 19:32:26 UTC

If only there's an epilogue of them in the future - getting old together in a perfect house with perfect neighbours and all that.
Ooh! I will have to ditto that! pretty please?

thelastfig August 11 2012, 20:30:26 UTC

Oh wow! Thank you for such a lovely comment. Hmmm an epilogue. Well, I won't lie and say I haven't thought about it, but I can't promise anything anytime soon. I think I'm adopting an unfinished piece and taking over for someone but after that... perhaps

thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it <3