Comments | theliningsilver: Sometimes I write. Try not to have a heart attack.

theliningsilver

Sometimes I write. Try not to have a heart attack.

Apr 30, 2005 09:25

I promise, this is starting to wind down. If y'all think it's totally dragging out, do let me know, but I swear it's reaching completion. *yawns*

( You can only keep secrets for so long - Consumed )

Comments 14

dragonsangel68 April 30 2005, 14:47:08 UTC

Poor Draco! It was a very dangerous thing he did, comparing morning sickness to a hangover, very lucky he was able to duck out of there without incurring an injury or two. And Octavia was brilliant! Telling him exactly what he is at times *giggles* Pansy's not going to get a minutes peace now that Draco is working things out (or being told bluntly).

It's not dragging on at all! I look forward to each and every installment *grins*

theliningsilver April 30 2005, 15:01:37 UTC

Awww... thank you! *hugs* This piece went somewhere entirely different than I thought it would, so I fear for its quality. *laughs* I always welcome constructive criticism, and y'all are always so sweet.

anonymous April 30 2005, 17:40:25 UTC

:: sigh :: I do love this so very much :) I don't think it's dragging whatsoever! And with every installment the tension and excitement builds until I just can't wait until they're in a room together with no way out! LOL

brilliant as per usual :-D

xania88 April 30 2005, 17:41:35 UTC

I came along to check up on Consumed and boy, was I happy to find the new chapter posted up!

It's not dragging on at all. It's flowing wonderfully and each and every chapter is just wonderful! I love all of it!

*happy sigh* Poor Draco, though. All the women turning on him, leaving him flustered. Loved it. And Ron, darling! Thou finally told it to someone. I'm so proud of you! Though not as proud as I'll be when you finally buck up and get your girl.

Err...yeah. Excuse the insanity. Geography aftereffects.

kaz814 April 30 2005, 18:02:25 UTC

Oh I love it so very much. Pansy and the broom (Awwwwwww if she's doing what I think she's doing), and Ron and Harry, and Tavia and Draco and *giggles* over Ginny and Draco.

A lovely chapter - great characterizations and full of plot and it's made me smile.

:D

fatima April 30 2005, 18:56:36 UTC

You will hear no complaints from me. I'm feeling for Ron. The way he told Harry Gin was pregnant. It was so sad. *s* And Pansy... well the girl is tough, but I guess she still has her breaking point!

I loved it!

So I guess this is leading into another wedding???