LJ Idol Week 6: step on a crack

[seratonation]

Astro-Twins | Prequel to week 4 but both can stand alone | PG for swears

She was going to die. She saw Mike disappear into the distance, and she was going to die. Her heart was beating a million times a minute and she was going to die.

Comments

[bleodswean]

Lots of action here - nice!

[seratonation]

Thank you!

[eska818]

breaks heal on their own, and quickly

heh, someone has high hopes! Weeks is definitely not quickly.. and it certainly isn't going to heal quickly if they're running from zombies! XD

[seratonation]

she's kind of stubborn and doesn't to worry him, thats all :D thanks for reading!

[eternal_ot]

Ah! glad to see Astro-twins back in action...:)..a good read! hope to see them more often..;)

[seratonation]

\o/ i am so happy they're starting to be recognised, omg! I'm really enjoying writing them so I'm sure we'll see more, topics allowing :P

thank you so much!

[tatdatcm]

I like that she didn't feel the pain until they were safe and the adrenaline started wearing off.

Well done.

[seratonation]

thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[lawchicky]

Great job here- you got my blood racing just reading it.

[seratonation]

:D:D:D I'm so glad! thank you!