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[themid_nightsun]

This may have been 1 step too far. I must report this on Live journal. (who knows, maybe i will get an urge to do a bigger post later, I feel one coming

Comments

Asshole moment on my part.... sorry Sky.

[bustybabe84]

Your use of commas were fine... but unfortunately... your use of an apostrophe shows passiveness of a noun... of which there's no possession... like Emily Rose.

Nuttin' but love kiddos!!!

~Mar~

Re: Asshole moment on my part.... sorry Sky.

[nireus]

Passiveness of a noun? Surely you meant possession.

[cyanhlywd4]

Your commas look good, but I am afraid your (-) is wrong :( It should be a (--). You dissapoint me ;)

[anonymous]

And you said "a Avanti's" instead of "an Avanti's"

[burning_spirit]

By the way, that was me

[fauxgenius]

Since everyone else is berating your grammar I'll go ahead and note that you've got some capitalization issues. =P

[shelovesthegame]

oo! Okay! I wanna play! Ummm... betweeen "later" and "I feel one coming" it should be a semi-colon, not a comma.

<3 u!